Author Topic: 1st vid: stripped (Read 1791 times)

RAD · « **on:** December 20, 2005, 09:04:33 PM »

This is my first attempt at a proper stunting video in SA. It's just a beginners level video, so theres nothing death defying in there, and they're likely to be old stunts, but meh i had fun making it.

TGA link

FileFront link

Thanks in advance to those who watch it and can offer constructive critcism.

stuntman · « **Reply #1 on:** December 20, 2005, 10:20:54 PM »

dling

btw that tga upload needs a ddescription writing for it within two days, it wont work otherwise

it was pretty good for your first attempt, the editng was ok, i didnt like the music, and the lagginess of the clips let it down, they were jumpy, the stunts were pretty good though mate, compared to my first couple of vids, gj keep em coming

Kert · « **Reply #2 on:** December 21, 2005, 01:52:45 AM »

Dlinga, will comment later

shadow · « **Reply #3 on:** December 21, 2005, 04:21:17 AM »

im at school about to die ill download later.....

im not even sure if im aloud on here

ill download and give comments later

Liviu · « **Reply #4 on:** December 21, 2005, 07:42:22 AM »

Pretty good vid for a first,i dont think i have seen a better 'FIRST'

The music was a bit wierd but ok.editing was good too,i liked the stunts,some neat stuff in there.seeing as its your first i was expecting some lame pole bumping 360s or stuff(i saw one or 2 tho

) but i was nicely surprised to see p2b2bb's n other nice stuff,that may be the effect of actually downloading a few expert vids first

anyways,decent vid,especially for a first,keep it up.

Kert · « **Reply #5 on:** December 21, 2005, 07:46:54 AM »

Nice vid, stunts were too easy, try some more difficult stuff, read the stunting guide by DC and watch vids...youÃƒâ€šÃ‚Â´ll be great in no time...anyway GJ

nate · « **Reply #6 on:** December 21, 2005, 08:12:23 AM »

Even if you take away the fact it's your first I think it was a pretty great vid. I am not much for the music but thats personal taste.

I thought the vid was really good and I cannot wait to see more only thing I would have changed was the camera angles in the replays, seemed like I was playing the game more than watching a replay file, but other than that sick vid, keep em coming.

RAD · « **Reply #7 on:** December 21, 2005, 10:03:40 PM »

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the lagginess of the clips let it down, they were jumpy

Just wondering, what do you mean by they were laggy/jumpy?

Anyway, thanks for the useful feedback, i'm already working on my 2nd

kr3mlin · « **Reply #8 on:** December 22, 2005, 12:40:26 AM »

The presentation of this video was very good, either you've made some videos somewhere before or you have a knack for it, either way the quality and the appearance overall was very nice

The stunts looked like stunts from a 1st vid which is ok, just keep going bigger and better and more impressive and watch more and more vids to get ideas about some other possibilities. Also check out the stunting guide in SA chat & Support by Deathcobra to help with your ideas. Good luck man i hope to see improvement with each new video

stuntman · « **Reply #9 on:** December 22, 2005, 01:01:13 AM »

by that i meant the quality of the clips was quite poor, it wasnt smooth, it was quite laggy

Author Topic: 1st vid: stripped (Read 1791 times)

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