Well not bad for a first VC vid, dude. A little short, but that's what it's like when you're starting out...just wanna get some stuff out there.
If I could give some constructive criticism, it'd be this:
- Download a whole bunch of recently released vids (Opposide, Mutuality, Villainous, etc) and look at what's being done
- Find any and all tutorial vids and threads on this forum and find out how to do the techniques
- Try not to put in stunts that seem more lucky than anything
- Keep on stunting!!! Don't let criticism of your first vid weigh you down too much. Everyone here pretty much got ragged on when they started out
It's good to see even more new stunters taking up the reigns, dude. So keep at it. Great first effort and I really hope to see more from ya in the future.