Starting at the beginning of the vid:
IntroThe intro was great. Great camera angles, awesome editing. I loved th billboards idea. I loved the font used, everything. The music and the editing fitted together very well indeed. The enviroment was great, and the whole weather idea worked well. I especially loved the camera angle of kert6699 (not the actual angle, the angle of the pic on the bb). I did notice you stole DeathCobra's carcols wite
The "Aftershock" logo didn't really fit the name, but it still looks cool.
Main Part1:16 - 1:25 I loved the way you started black and white, and as soon as the music got loud, and you hit the bump, it went into normal color. The stunt itself was great, though I was dissapointed, as I thought you were gonna make it onto the roof next to you.
1:26 - 1:30 Nice! The flash transition worked well, and the stunt itself was a nice one. Who says cars are no fun?
1:31 - 1:36 No editing tricks here. I expected the stunt to end up like it did, but it was great that you threw in a corkscrew too.
1:37 - 1:42 Nice pb Sweet! No editing tricks again, just two transitions. The pb itself was great, and yet again, more has been added to it by throwing in a krail :grin:
1:43 - 1:53 Great boat landing! It requires great precision to pull off somthing like that. Though most boat landings look really easy, I think you can see the difficulty in it. Great job. The fact you used a Sanchez to perform it added to it greatly. The NRG ain't the only bike on the game
1:54 - 2:10 Wow, was that accidentely performed three times? Editing was kinda anoying there, and the fact you performed it three times took the wow factor away for me.
2:11 - 2:15 Not a very high bb, but it was still a good stunt. GJ
2:16 - 2:27 This has to be one of my favourite stunts. I was trying that with a Freeway the other day! Are you spying on me?
Great job.
2:28 - 2:32 Great to see the BBM being used. Great job man. I expected you to land on the higher part of the sign.
2:33 - 2:38 Another great pb from Sweet. Great height too, shame there wasn't a krail or cork thrown in too.
2:39 - 2:44 That was the best cab stunt I've ever seen Tackle! The clip started at a great point and matched the music with, what, 99.9% accuracy?
2:45 - 2:49 Wow? Definately. I was amazed how clean the landing was. Great job.
2:50 - 2:55 Woah! i loved how you used the ambulance's windsheild as a ramp! This has to be one of the best bicycle stunts ever performed
2:56 - 3:01 At first I though "Damn, old", nope. I wondered why the packer was parked like that, great job, same spot as Buzzsaw's in Gasoline 2, but meh.
3:02 - 3:06 Great stunt! Yet another pb?!?! Sweet, you're officially a pb whore
3:07 - 3:18 Wow, just wow. Awesome camera work, and the bump was definately not expected to turn out like it did.
3:19 - 3:26 Awesome editing, yet again, fitted the music like cogs are designed to mesh together! The stunt itself was unexpected, I thought you were gonna land on the bb, not grind it
3:27 - 3:34 Editing was great, again. As for the stunt, you only just missed out. Buzzsaw performed it in "Supersonic".
3:35 - 3:40 Another?!? You must love Packers Sweet
3:41 - 3:46 Unexpected again, but great stunt still.
3:47 - 3:51 Wow! This stunt is really tempting me to get on my mountain bike and start bunnyhopping! Great height and nice landing.
3:52 - 4:03 Great stunt, but old. It was performed in "The Final Destination", I think
4:04 - 4:08 Old, but great landing
4:09 - 4:14 Not very high, but hey, it's a damn Faggio, so it pwned
4:15 - 4:25 Cool, you've brought stoppie 2 grinds to SA. Great job!
4:26 - 4:37 Another pb from Sweet?!?!
4:38 - 5:05 More great camera work, sweet p2b, nice stuff Tack
5:06 - 5:16 Wow, great krail to grind. Good job Turtle
5:17 - 5:22 LOL! That's one way to cross a road, good job Tack.
5:23 - 5:27 That was... different. Coolios.
5:28 - 5:46 A great last stunt, good job kert. I liked how you faded it out slowly. Great stuff
Outro/CreditsI didn't like the black and white effect on all of the outro stunts. Stunts were nothing good, but that's where you put the bad stuff. You jam it in the outro
OverallGreat video, a must watch for sure. These guys are cathcing up with XSA.
ImprovingDon't use so much black and white effects.
Try some aircraft stunts maybe.
Sweet, try something over than a pb or p2b!
^It was hard trying to find things wrong with it