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Offline Raffal

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Raffal - Sweet Dreams
« on: April 02, 2015, 07:02:47 AM »
Hey guys this is my second Solo in Gta V , I worked hard on it , trying to mix styles and do my best as always. I hope you will notice that and obviously enjoy it  :)

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Re: Raffal - Sweet Dreams
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2015, 07:42:18 AM »
that was a nice mix of stunts. there was some good stuff, but also a lot of filler.
 it might have been a little long for my taste, but i always prefer a shorter vid with bigger bangers.
i noticed you left some (or at least one) bail in there @ 4:50. i'd cut stuff like that. but then you had that awesome double bump @ 5:10. i'd focus on stuff like that.

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Re: Raffal - Sweet Dreams
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2015, 08:57:55 AM »
that was a nice mix of stunts. there was some good stuff, but also a lot of filler.
 

I agree about the last grind He has a bad execution,  to defend myself I would say I redid the stunt several times and each time it was the same thing : I need a lot of speed to get the grind = when i grind it i have too much speed = I fall at the end   :(

But without that little mistake I do not see what you're talking about give me some examples ?

Anyways , thank you for your comment all opinions are welcome ;)

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Re: Raffal - Sweet Dreams
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2015, 09:43:32 AM »
Badass solo dude, loved the finisher and the stunts where you bumped off the roof you landed on to another... gotta love that element of surprise.
I like how the stunts seemed to, in terms of their 'size', build along with the song.
You have a good eye for stunts and editing, keep developing it :)

 

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