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Offline Omma!

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1st FL Studio track
« on: March 09, 2015, 10:36:28 AM »
Yoo myniggas, this is my first project in fl studio, hope you like it even if I know most of the guys here don't like this genre :wub:

https://soundcloud.com/omarbronz/track-1

Would be cool if someone good with the software can give me some feedbacks :D
« Last Edit: March 09, 2015, 10:39:24 AM by Omma! »

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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2015, 11:20:27 AM »
Dude love the groove going/building on from 1:17
sounds chill
Nice work for your first project!


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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2015, 08:03:24 PM »
Pretty good for a first one!
I'm not into techno that much and sometimes some tracks sound a bit weird for me but I'm not sure if that's the way they're supposed to sound :lol:
However, I'll give you my point of view. The bassline and the short arps sound off-key, in case you don't know musical theory you should give it a read on Google, there are many simple articles over there which are pretty easy to understand :P
Your synths also lack sidechain or they need a deeper one with a longer release, kick doesn't gets to fit in the mix properly. I would also recommend you to EQ things properly. For example apply to everything that is not sub-bass related a high pass filter above ~400hz depending on the track. To make sounds more crisp and clear boost the higher frequencies (but not too much, they will be ear-piercing otherwise). But keep in mind that you have to EQ things intelligently, boosting is not everything. EQing is a bit more about cutting and arranging frequencies. There are also tuts on YT that explain things a lot more.

I gotta go to sleep now but I'd give you more advices. If you need some help or have some doubts just let me know and I'll try to guide you man ;)
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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2015, 02:39:13 AM »
Ok thanks man, I'll keep those things in mind! Also waiting for other advices :cc_detective:

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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #4 on: March 10, 2015, 09:11:15 AM »
I just remember something. If you're looking for tutorials I'd recommend you to check out Beats4Beets, John Miller, FL Studio Guru, and many more. But they were the guys I looked up to most. :P

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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2015, 09:47:08 AM »
there is definitely too much low frequency getting added one on the other, cut those from everything other than bass and percussions, and also needs more ducking on the sidechain if there is any... and dont add much release like everybody does, that kills the melody, just make sure that when the kick hits it will cut almost 100% of the sound for a very short time

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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2015, 01:01:58 PM »
Thanks guys, now I watched some tutorials on youtube and I can really hear what you were talking about. I'll try to improve everything in the next song. Also thanks Ltab, I'll sure contact you if I need any help  :D

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Re: 1st FL Studio track
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2015, 07:40:35 AM »
Has a Suicide Circus sound, feeling it. Just try to improve on your production, keep it up

 

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