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Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« on: February 13, 2014, 08:38:54 AM »
Hey guys!

Here is my first stuntage, I worked like ... 3 weeks on the stunts and 3 days on editing. I made all this stunts online and I used only motorcycles for this one, I'll try to use cars & stuff for my next montage (this one is my first so I prefered to do simple things ^^).

Here is the video :
Freezy Stunts 1 - GTA 5 Stunt Montage by Freez

Please tell me what you think about it, what I could improve etc ... and PLEASE don't forget that it's my first stuntage! ahah

Thanks!
« Last Edit: February 13, 2014, 08:42:39 AM by Freez »

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2014, 08:43:13 AM »
Awesome! Great job, especially for a first montage! It was also great that you didnt use franklin's special ability on any bumps!  :D

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2014, 11:16:10 AM »
As I already told you, that opener was sexy, really great to see that you improved a lot. Some stunts where you don't land anything could have been removed though.


great video for a first, great editing aswell. Looking forward to your next videos. :)

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2014, 12:13:23 PM »
The opener was nice, albeit lucky :P, and the water gap to grind combo was pretty cool too, overall nice first solo, keep it up :euro:

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2014, 01:53:46 PM »
well that edit was something man  :wub:  the stunts were gr8 and fresh aswell.

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #5 on: February 13, 2014, 03:02:17 PM »
Loved the stunt and the edit a lot, good job.

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #6 on: February 13, 2014, 04:16:31 PM »
Thanks a lot guys! I really appreciate your comments :)

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #7 on: February 14, 2014, 06:10:51 AM »
That was very well done, one thing I noticed that impressed me was your ability to predict where and how you were going to hit other objects or buildings and adjust accordingly before the impact to add another bump or avoid bailing which is a key part of stunting.
The main area I'd try to improve in is picking your spots better, try to base your ideas around less bumps per stunts but more powerful ones to land higher buildings or cover bigger distances so that they seem less like random stunts-by-accident and more like a compilation of individual visions that took time, effort and a technical comprehension to accomplish.
I loved the fact that you used a lot of new spots instead of redoing or building upon new ideas, keep that up.

I'd give it a 8/10 but since it's your first I'll bump it up to a 9/10, I'm very interested in seeing what you're up to next :cc_detective:

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #8 on: February 14, 2014, 07:51:13 AM »
lucky opener  :ninja: but very nice vid' i enjoyed it alot !

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #9 on: February 14, 2014, 07:57:47 AM »
Nice video, well put together and it had some pretty sweet stunts, man! :cc_detective:

I lost one stunt but I wasn't going to use it for anything too serious anyway :P

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Re: Freezy Stunts 1 [My First Stuntage!]
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2014, 12:03:05 PM »
That was very well done, one thing I noticed that impressed me was your ability to predict where and how you were going to hit other objects or buildings and adjust accordingly before the impact to add another bump or avoid bailing which is a key part of stunting.
The main area I'd try to improve in is picking your spots better, try to base your ideas around less bumps per stunts but more powerful ones to land higher buildings or cover bigger distances so that they seem less like random stunts-by-accident and more like a compilation of individual visions that took time, effort and a technical comprehension to accomplish.
I loved the fact that you used a lot of new spots instead of redoing or building upon new ideas, keep that up.

I'd give it a 8/10 but since it's your first I'll bump it up to a 9/10, I'm very interested in seeing what you're up to next :cc_detective:

WOW thanks a lot dude! Your comment will help me a lot for my next montages! It's also a big motivation to get that kind of comments from a guy like you! :)

Lucky opener? Not really, I was trying to hit that so .. yeah :P

What stunt Eddy? :)

 

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