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2:16 goes for the most random stunt of the year so far.Didn't quite like the editing, could seldom see a thing on some stunts.
Quote from: Ed on July 17, 2013, 11:06:52 AM2:16 goes for the most random stunt of the year so far.Didn't quite like the editing, could seldom see a thing on some stunts.I'd like to stress this post in particular. The video clearly shows potential as mentioned before, but the editing was very vague. We see a lot of "good" edited videos which have nice effects which are nicely synced to the music. However, the editing mostly does not show the true potential or awesomeness of the stunt. The same applies here. The effects in itself were cool, but they didn't made me go from "oh nice stunt" to "holy motherfucking shit". Concerning the stunt at 2:16; I was busy trying to see what was happening rather than enjoying what was happening. After a couple of checks I can only say it appears to be a ledgegrind. A bit of Freeplay use at this part, showing the bike approaching its ending (atleast in this shot, it ends near the pole of the trainway, which would be a nice point to 'film' from). It would show a lot more of the stunt. All in all the editing wasn't bad, but it could've been more suited to the stunts.On to the stunts, the proper reason to watch these videos IMO: there were some very cool ideas and it's clear you have a lot of potential. As MikeyMouse said earlier, don't settle for random shit you think looks good. The grind2grab with the stuck Infernus (as mentioned by him) is an excellent example. The grind 2 Infernus 'bump' grind would have been a nice stunt and with a little more runup (aka position the Infernus a little bit back) would've insured you'd make the grind. Look at spots and think "Hmm, what's the craziest thing I could do here?"TL;DR: Cool video, much potential in stunting but aim high, editing OK but needs a bit of work, but all in all enjoyable nonetheless.
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