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Offline toty

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Cirillistar
« on: July 01, 2013, 08:25:24 PM »
Cirilistar

Im proud to present Mikela first solo Cirillistar, edited by me.


Mikela's quote:
Thanks to:
ToTy971
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Nikedj
Plani
OversizeD
Nem
JoepGta
Gaz
 

Thanks for watching

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2013, 08:40:05 PM »
Solid video. Pretty much lost 2 stunts....
Nice stunts :) I like the pre finisher alot.
I told you not to release 1:34 untill I landed my variation of it. But whatever.
Nice atmosphere here. Keep it up.
« Last Edit: July 01, 2013, 08:42:05 PM by OversizeD »

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2013, 08:52:07 PM »
Solid video. Pretty much lost 2 stunts....
Nice stunts :) I like the pre finisher alot.
I told you not to release 1:34 untill I landed my variation of it. But whatever.
Nice atmosphere here. Keep it up.
Thx you.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2013, 08:58:08 PM »
Pretty solid vid for a first, lots of oldies, but that's alright. The bike BB preci was nice, 2:01 was sexy execution-wise, the airport preci was either really lucky or really well-thought of & skillfully done, either way, it looked impressive & the finisher was sweet as well.

The editing was pretty solid, loved the colors, however there is a lot of place for improvement.
Firstly, try not to move the camera when you're in free camera mode, it just looks very choppy & breaks the flow of the vid, just place it at 1 good spot & let it record, or move it in 1 direction with the keyboard, just don't involve your mouse. Second, there's not a lot of synchronizing going on here, you always want to sync things to the music to make it flow well. Just find the most accentuated bass/strong point in a song for the time inclination where the stunt is set, lock onto that point & drag the bump or landing, or something that would flow with the synchronization, then edit around that point, make some multiple angles, maybe add some pan/crop to more thoroughly accentuate the stunt, if needed. The angles were surprisingly good, they weren't too spastic & neither too still, they were pretty well done & showcased the stunts quite nicely, however, what would've made them even better was some pan/crop action to add a nice flow & movement to the whole thing. Just zoom in a little & make some subtle movements & angle changes, that are not really noticeable at first, but are just enough to compliment & improve the flow of the overall project. Lastly, I'd recommend getting rid of that horrid lag. If you're using fraps, set the recorder to record at 10 fps. When you're done, drag the clip over to Vegas, right click it & in properties set the Playback rate to 2.5 (3 for Vice City). It also won't hurt to untick the "Maintain Aspect Ratio" & disable resample. You'll have to do this for every individual clip, it might be a bit tedious, but it'll give a massive improvement to your productions.

Song was pretty sweet too.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2013, 09:03:16 PM »
Thanks for the coment determined, I remember all this the next time.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2013, 10:10:35 PM »
Nice vid for a first one. Good job mate keep it up! :)

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2013, 01:35:18 AM »
Oh I'm in the special thanks :> senks Mikela. Pretty cool solo, even though there were some oldies I liked the mtb bild prec and the finisher. But the whole vid was a bit laggy, wasn't it? Well, would be good if you fix it next time, still a cool solo though, good job!

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2013, 05:22:48 AM »
dude misspelled my fucking 2-letter name... must be related to diaz  :P

watching

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well, you gotta start somewhere. it's not the best, niether the worst first solo i've seen. keep it coming :ajaja:
« Last Edit: July 02, 2013, 05:32:40 AM by JL »

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2013, 05:55:55 AM »
New stunts: BB precision and the 2 random precisions, unsure about SF infy and lv sandking stunt

Gj for first, aga in sry for wird english, my phone Triest Tod correct everything Pinto german

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #9 on: July 02, 2013, 06:18:58 AM »
Cool for first, but it was a bit laggy so I could not enjoy that much.
And yes JL your name is too long to memorize.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #10 on: July 02, 2013, 07:57:26 AM »
nice for first  :happy:

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #11 on: July 02, 2013, 08:26:19 AM »
Thanks all next time i will fix this lag.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #12 on: July 02, 2013, 10:21:30 AM »
Not bad, even rather good ! I liked the curb infy has 2.16, on the other hand I lost a replay:/I like and for the first solo one saw worse:)
« Last Edit: July 02, 2013, 11:26:59 AM by Heliks »

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #13 on: July 02, 2013, 07:47:18 PM »
Good job, neat video, work on the editing a bit more.

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Re: Cirillistar
« Reply #14 on: July 02, 2013, 08:29:38 PM »
gj , neat vid , just fix the lags and camera and it will be perfect .  :)

 

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