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Offline Vegas

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Dance in the fire
« on: September 25, 2012, 11:19:55 PM »
Hey guys, I guess nobody here actually remembers me but whatever :lol: I started stunting back in May '11 and made last video almost a year ago. I've been on some kind of hiatus and haven't played GTA for a looong time. About now I decided to make a last full-length video for the time being. From now on, I will do single stunt videos, which I think, will make me improve my editing faster than this, because landing stunts takes some time...
Anyway, the video. These stunts have been landed pretty much in my whole period of stunting, I could just say I'm just getting rid of some replays. There might be some old stunts, but I thought them all out by myself :P
As for the video, I'm not really satisfied with the editing I did. I think I picked too hard song for me to edit, but by mistakes, we learn, eh? ::) So I kindly hope to see some feedback from you so I won't make the same mistakes again. ;)
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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2012, 11:54:23 PM »
Some nice stunts.
Editing could be improved quite a lot.
Please don't use such a reflective ENB, it looks really ugly.
calm down with the shakes.
Other than that i enjoyed it!  :happy:

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #2 on: September 26, 2012, 01:01:28 AM »
Some nice stunts.
Editing could be improved quite a lot.
Please don't use such a reflective ENB, it looks really ugly.
calm down with the shakes.
Other than that i enjoyed it!  :happy:

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #3 on: September 26, 2012, 03:21:49 AM »
Little too much ENB editing wise but the video itself was ossim  :a-cheer: Stoppietowheeltospin2grind thing in LS and the mtb parkourie thing were great. Eventhough the mtb stunt was done in more then 1 replay.

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #4 on: September 26, 2012, 05:12:52 AM »
Stoppietowheeltospin2grind thing in LS and the mtb parkourie thing were great. Eventhough the mtb stunt was done in more then 1 replay.
It was not. I only cutted it so it was synced with music because I was doing some straightening up before the jump :lol:


proof (rep): http://www.sendspace.com/file/rbing9


thanks for the constructivism ;)
« Last Edit: September 26, 2012, 12:29:21 PM by Vegas »

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #5 on: September 26, 2012, 06:06:02 AM »
some very nice grinds it it. good job ;D

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #6 on: September 26, 2012, 06:10:58 AM »
Well, I have enjoyed SU much the video, really, I´ve liked a lot the song. Now, talk about the stunts, some of the stunts were random, but the other ones were great stunts, and for the opener and finisher, try to put better stunts. And to the editing, it was very great, the two thinks that I don't liked so much were the ENB, try to dont use it, cause it ruins the video, and the shaking, try to don't use that too. It was a great video, dude, keep improving.  ;)

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #7 on: September 26, 2012, 06:12:00 AM »
Some simple yet stylish stunts in there like the last stunt. 1:03 also looked nice but I guess you fell off because you cut the replay short?
The colours looked a little bright and a little crazy but besides that the edit was quite nice.

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #8 on: September 26, 2012, 06:23:14 AM »
Some crazy ideas dude, I think the second stunt was the best (not sure it was a grind in a info bb infront of the disco club) Althought you are nice stunter :) Edit was cool, a bit mehish cam angles and ENB was a bit bad :) Btw I remember you man ;) I didn't expect such a nice vid from you ! ohhh forgot to say the freeway grind was epic too :O GJ again man 9/10 for stunting

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #9 on: September 26, 2012, 06:24:40 AM »
Some nice stunts.
Editing could be improved quite a lot.
Please don't use such a reflective ENB, it looks really ugly.
calm down with the shakes.
Other than that i enjoyed it!  :happy:

what else is there to say

i don't like some of the cam angles..and cc could be better, i guess. This extreme blue sky doesn't realy looks good.

but stunting stuff was cool.

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #10 on: September 26, 2012, 06:31:52 AM »
Nice creative stunts there, simple editing, good job! :euro:

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #11 on: September 26, 2012, 06:40:43 AM »
As others have said, the ENB settings you're using don't look very good, but it aside from that it's cool :cc_detective:

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #12 on: September 26, 2012, 07:38:10 AM »
That was amazing Vegas ! You improved a lot. Stunts were nice , some really nice grinds , for example 2:01 , 2:49 3:00 and 3:15. Editing was great too , but next time will be better if you'll make it without those black lines. It was good vid anyway , so good job my friend :).

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2012, 07:43:32 AM »
Sup, Vegas?  :euro:

Great video, loved it. :cc_detective:

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Re: Dance in the fire
« Reply #14 on: September 26, 2012, 12:28:53 PM »

Thank you all for the reviews, it means alot to me :P
 
1:03 also looked nice but I guess you fell off because you cut the replay short?
I managed to grind it to the end but I failed at the landing, true :euro:

 
Btw I remember you man ;) I didn't expect such a nice vid from you !
well I'm glad to hear that, thank you!
« Last Edit: September 26, 2012, 12:31:56 PM by Vegas »

 

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