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Offline Biel

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Ondine
« on: September 12, 2012, 05:57:09 PM »

I'm proud to present to you: "Ondine" :a-cheer:
A SA Collab organized and edited by me.
Old&New stunts are accepted.

Stunt performance by:
alieNboy
Basium
Biel
Determined
draguN
Derpy
ExRer
IceD
Named
Paull
Scavenger
Syny
PK
Waffy


Streaming:
Ondine

Download links:
http://depositfiles.com/files/wvqyewjul
« Last Edit: September 13, 2012, 09:39:11 AM by Biel »

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2012, 06:00:19 PM »
Just for the record, all of my stunts have been released in various different vids, I had no idea Biel's gonna make a collab with them when I sent them to him  :lol:

Watching  :euro:

That was pretty cool, I liked Biel's double grind, Exrer's infy stunt & Scav's grind curb bump thingie, looked stylish!

The intro was beautiful, loved the shot & the colors, you could've given the text an outline though to make it more apparent. The vid itself was decently edited, the colors were, for the most part, good, for some clips they didn't look good, but for the majority they worked. The vid did feel a bit slow paced at times & that didn't fit the song too much, you should've implied some more cutting & synchronizing at some parts & maybe leave out the slower parts of the run ups. I liked your use of effects & sync as well as pan/crop, though you should work on your angles more, they were really uninspired at times, some of them were good, but most were average. Overall it's an enjoyable vid, though without its flaws, but pretty great for someone who's as experienced as you are  :euro:

Also the nametags were way too big & should've been in either of the corners, usually something like 22-28pt (depending on what font you're using) is fine.
« Last Edit: September 12, 2012, 06:11:23 PM by Determined »

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2012, 06:03:21 PM »
Good video.

Fresh edit. Glad to see that you improved in editing.   ;)
A lot of oldies but that was okay.
« Last Edit: September 12, 2012, 06:09:28 PM by Syny »

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2012, 06:17:10 PM »
The less fps you record with, the smoother the angles  :euro:
It's not really the movement as much as it is the placement, you want to show the stunt from the best possible angle, making it look better than it actually is.

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2012, 06:20:25 PM »
Awesome video.... liked every bit of it... your improving and good job.

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2012, 08:17:50 PM »
Enjoyable video despite the oldies. Determined's opener and Alienboy's tankbump were pretty good.

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2012, 08:58:26 PM »
nice

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #7 on: September 12, 2012, 10:35:27 PM »
Damn, I was suppose to send you something :(

Nice collab anyways.

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2012, 11:06:34 PM »
Wow that was a fast and decent edit good job Biel i start loving you :D  :wub:

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #9 on: September 12, 2012, 11:11:47 PM »
awesome video actually didn't expect that much :wub: the music choise was top ! :jajaja: for the stunts, not bad few stunts that I really liked, especially Scavanger stunt was just amazing :a-cheer: but some stunts like Biel's looked so strange :euro: :hmm: GJ overall, glad to be in this :) :happy:

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #10 on: September 12, 2012, 11:24:28 PM »
Why is Determineds and Iceds name in different color?  :hmm:
Pretty cool edit actually, good job :]
Scavs stunt was really cool.

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #11 on: September 13, 2012, 12:02:59 AM »
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« Last Edit: May 30, 2019, 10:39:51 AM by ArtĀ Ā  »

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #12 on: September 13, 2012, 12:17:24 AM »
4:15 :wub:
i think there were maybe 3 new stunts, editing was kinda laggy, but it was ok overally
i dont like music used here
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Why is Determineds and Iceds name in different color?
i think cause of they are in network crews
Syny is in network crew too :P I think it's because they are Veteran membes :jajaja: :jajaja:
« Last Edit: September 13, 2012, 12:19:15 AM by alieNboy »

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #13 on: September 13, 2012, 03:29:56 AM »
Awesome video  :happy: I was an****!!~!@@## I could send more stunts but,nah..

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Re: Ondine
« Reply #14 on: September 13, 2012, 03:43:38 AM »
Basium's stunt was actually a crap, really enjoyed every single stunt and the editing was something special from you, keep on improving.  :)

 

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