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« on: July 26, 2005, 11:36:43 AM »
http://files.filefront.com/Boiled/;3966962;;/fileinfo.html

its my first try.., what do you think?
yeah, boiled is a stupid name ;)
« Last Edit: July 26, 2005, 11:49:37 AM by Tromeo »

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« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2005, 11:43:05 AM »
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Your D/L doesnt work.And boiled isnt the worst name ive ever seen

EDIT:D/ling

Wow.For a first vid this was amazing.The stunts were great,the editing good and the music was good too.

Editing:Very good,nice camera angles and good quality rendering.
9/10

Music:Good choice
9/10

Stunts:These were very good.On that opening stunt I just thought WOW.Some old spots but thats to be expected.The only glitch was the lack of variety.It seemed to be only roof and gaps.Work on some car stunts next time.
10/10-Based on the fact it was your first vid

How long have you been stunting for?Im sure more experience members would be proud of this.Keep up the good work!
« Last Edit: July 26, 2005, 12:16:07 PM by DeathCobra »

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« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2005, 11:50:08 AM »
link is edited :)

edit:
I started stunting 5 days ago (21.07.05)
there i made my first basic roof..

thx for the comment :)
 
« Last Edit: July 26, 2005, 01:19:17 PM by Tromeo »

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« Reply #3 on: July 26, 2005, 01:39:10 PM »
This was a very solid first video. The stunts weren't all that spectacular, but you had some good ones and there was pretty good variety. The music fit allright, but I didn't really like it. Can't hold that against you, just not my taste in music. The editing was okay, but the transitions from intro to stunts and from stunts to credits weren't very smooth. Keep practicing and watching other vids and you'll be really good!

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« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2005, 02:03:53 PM »
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The editing was okay, but the transitions from intro to stunts and from stunts to credits weren't very smooth.

yeah, i noticed that, and i tried a few different ways to do it better, but all my tries didnt work well..
ill watch out for other transitions :)

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« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2005, 02:06:30 PM »
Not a big problem. You'll figure it out after a couple of vids.

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« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2005, 02:16:58 PM »
dling

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« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2005, 02:23:00 PM »
D/Ling
 

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« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2005, 02:29:24 PM »
Downloading

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Great first vid very good keep em comming,
I mostly agree with deathcobra so yeah just read that again xD
« Last Edit: July 26, 2005, 02:48:17 PM by impulse »

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« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2005, 02:59:38 PM »
I am downloading it now, i will edit this and give it a rating.

*Edit*

Ok, i have watched it twice now, it was really good  nice intro, reminds me did you make that intro or get it off something? anyway

quality 10/10
Stunts  8/10
Presentation 7.5/10
Music (this one isn't important as it is only an opinion) 7/10 i don't think that it fit in with the stunts

Overall, 8.5/10 really, really good for a frist video.

Nice, keep 'em coming.
« Last Edit: July 26, 2005, 03:42:17 PM by Brainkiller »

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« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2005, 02:00:43 AM »
i made this intro myself... using the beagle

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« Reply #11 on: July 27, 2005, 04:29:08 AM »
Cool vid dude,

But try to do some packer2bumps, that will create more stunts for ya.

GJ dude, i'm gonna give you 2 grins!!!! that's pretty good dude!!! :grin: :grin:

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« Reply #12 on: July 27, 2005, 02:04:16 PM »
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EDIT: Decent vid even though mostly everything was done before. And pretty good edting
7/10
« Last Edit: July 27, 2005, 02:16:56 PM by GTA_Gangsta' »

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« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2005, 11:41:02 AM »
8/10
I enjoyed it, very good for a first vid.

 

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