If you're gonna do pan/crops like that, it would look better to smoothen them by just right-clicking on the keyframe and selecting "Smooth" (assuming you're using Vegas).
Also for fuck's sake use some rock or something, stuff like this along with faggotstep is one of the worst things to use in a stunt vid. I liked the overall editing though and the CC wasn't bad.
Glad you weren't just all-talk, I think with some hints and tips along the way you could become a great editor.