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Personally, for a first solo also being considered here. I thought it was enjoyable.Stunts overall were very good for a first solo.Editing was great except the harsh flashes (try blending them or using the opacity to make them less harsh) and the split screen bits. They fucked my head up as it was too much to handle. stick with the masking.I enjoyed the music also, smooth move.Overall i would say 8/10.Try finding more creative stunts, doesn't necessarily mean big air or grinds, just impress us. Good job!
nice colours and music, also liked the vc stunts
It was pretty good for a first, stunts, even though old, were executed quite nicely. 1:15 was fucking stylish as hell.Personally, I think a more pale green/blue based color correction would be more fitting to the song, the grunge color was way overplayed & brought the vid down a notch. The pacing was nice & the vid did have a nice atmosphere, but the effects didn't really go anywhere, at some parts there was a real need of escalade in effects & intensity as the song grew more aggressive & dynamic. Overall the sync was nice & the vid was enjoyable, but you should work on your effects & try to conserve some of the original colors of the game.For a first, it's a damn good vid, much better than what I did editingwise
I'd suggest trying a multi track CCing, you can get awesome CCs with the plainest of editing softwares. I usually do a ~27% opacity layer & play aroun with the compositing. Gradient & Bump maps are good for creating nice color mixtures, just keep the bump height at 0 & you can get a nice, intensive vignette that contrasts the colors, making it not as bland as it would be. A softly colored glow with minimal diffusion on the top layer can also do wonders
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