It's a pretty great idea but I think you didn't execute it quite right. The movement of the slide was a bit too fast and hurting for the eyes. Also it became a little bit disorienting after while due to it constantly moving in the same direction, thus I couldn't really catch up properly with all of the stunts. In my opinion it would be much more appealing if you had used some other ways to pop the stills on the screen instead of just one and maybe capture each still so it's kind of clearer what happens when seen in conjuncture.
I'm quite amazed with the idea though, but it would've turned out way better if more effort was put into it.