B(l)ack in Business

[Tackleberry]

I´m back in business with "B(l)ack in Business".  

Download it here:
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The video is quite long, almost 8 minutes. Therefore it´s alot of stunts in it and every stunt is performed with the NRG-500. No more to tell you about, it´s better that you see it instead of reading this crap... Maybe some stunts are "old", but I´m new here and haven´t seen so many movies. Have that in mind before you accuse me for anything.

I´m quite new to stunting, so you, who proboably are more experienced, will see many mistakes in it. Please tell me stuff I should learn and please give constructive criticism. I´ll be pleased with any comment.

With this movie I also want crews to discover me. Maybe I´m still not good enough, but I´m getting better every day.

Enjoy and thank you for watching!

[GTA_Gangsta']

Awsome vid man. Just a few older stunts but no biggie.

Music 8/10

Stunts 9/10

Editing 10/10

Overall 9.2/10

good job keep up the good work.

[Free Mike]

This video was allright, but it got boring pretty fast. None of the stunts were spectacular, but they were all farly good. The grinds were basically just driving the bike up to the rail and getting stuck on the rail, no krails or fast grinds. The stunts that landed on billboards were uninspired and very basic for San An. The video could have been shortned from 8 minutes by cutting away from stunts faster and removing some of the filler type stunts. I would like to see more variety also in a vid. The video was pretty good for someone who is new to stunting though. Thanks for sharing.

[DeathCobra]

DLing,if youve got the skill,im sure TMS will want you.Or ZF or SAST.Maybe even XSA.

[totallyrobot]

Not bad at all, pretty good in fact, just not super good editing, nice to hear Turbonegro in a video.
and a couple of new spots, or new approaches to spots.  

[Tackleberry]

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

@GTA_Gangsta': You´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think it´s way to high.

[BomberBoy]

DLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[darklord]

looks good for an first vid    

[Laketown]

D/L...

defenitatly not bad for a first vid. the only thing is to get higher P2B, and more variety. like car stunts.

[BomberBoy]

i have no constructive criticism, because it looks like you got all the basics.

stunts: 10/10

music: 10/10

editing: 10/10

overall: 10/10

GJ, Keep going

[GTA_Gangsta']

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

@GTA_Gangsta': You´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think it´s way to high.

9.2 to high this guy gave you a 10

anyway good job

[Test Bear]

It was alright, oyu seem decent at grinds, so work on those, also practice packer bumps.

Decent first vid, look forward to seeing more.

[Tackleberry]

...you seem decent at grinds...

Yes, the grinds were only supposed to get variation more variation in the movie. But now, afterwards, I think it would be better to skip them.

As I wrote, all the criticism you give will help me getting a better stunter, thank you.

[Mr.Magic]

Dling...

Can't Be worse than Pure Insanity.      

[Free Mike]

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

 

You certainly have potential and the fact that you learn from criticism instead of getting defensive about it will allow you to do even better and better in the stunting world. Glad I could help.