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Tempest
« on: January 30, 2012, 09:06:32 AM »
Tempest

Tempest

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Well, epic fail I guess. Must really agree with all of you who will say this is the worst idiot of all time. I was trying to edit on a rock song (short) since I haven't from a long time.

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2012, 09:12:47 AM »
Liked the stunts, the edit wasn't bad either tho I would've used a different color with this song. :)

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2012, 09:48:34 AM »
CC, EFFECTS, SONG WERE EPIC.
But work on these cam angels  :mellow:

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2012, 09:50:33 AM »

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2012, 12:00:42 PM »
Nice, but this is a bit dark for my eyes.

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2012, 04:50:32 AM »
Nice effects, the cc was kinda weird. But the edit was really nice. Just, put off that "widescreen" thingy in the game setts, and work more on your cam angle.

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2012, 07:20:24 AM »
nice editing dude although the CC is dark in the palm stunt and in the first prec it was bright.  :euro:

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2012, 07:39:24 AM »
Nice effects, the cc was kinda weird. But the edit was really nice. Just, put off that "widescreen" thingy in the game setts, and work more on your cam angle.

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2012, 08:54:43 AM »
Work on your cam angles, choice of whether to put effects or not because as some probably have seen I give a great fuck about atmosphere and I didn't feel anything here. Looked like you were trying to make up for it by try-hard overediting, flashes and an overdarkened half-assed night CC. I might come off harsh but it'll help.

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2012, 12:16:23 PM »
first stunt is very nice, editing isn't bad and i see that you are improving ;)

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2012, 01:04:17 PM »
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Re: Tempest
« Reply #11 on: February 01, 2012, 05:28:52 AM »
Thanks to all who replied and gave advice too :) And I didn't want to try over-editing, but tried to bring it 'to the beat' as some of you call it. lol Just realized it turned out into overediting, how epic  :lol:

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Re: Tempest
« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2012, 01:59:29 PM »
was the first stunt a gap to prec? :blink:

 

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