i see you took some tips from Anoobs tutorial.
some good stuff there, even though most of them seemed unfinished ;p
i just don't get the point of that quote in the begining,
and also you're 14 and you said "when i was young"
i'm 20 and i think i'm still young, also you said something about love, i'm pretty sure that aint no love, just a crush, you'll see what i mean after few years.
good luck with that crew ;]