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« Last Edit: June 24, 2011, 01:11:26 PM by FallDress »

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #16 on: June 24, 2011, 12:35:03 PM »
???
forget it

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #17 on: June 24, 2011, 05:06:02 PM »
1. there are lots of other landings to this building, just watch some older vids
2. 00:47 has been done naturally with a slightly different run up, I'm surprised you didn't notice the obvious bump right in front of the building when doing this.
3. You did the same p2b with 3 different vehicles & 2 csm's that are almost the same except for the way they're set up, I wouldn't exactly call those different from one another.
4. The place where you did the p2bs, it can be used as a ramp to do a natural stunt, how could you not notice that?

You should've put more effort in this, seems like you only chose to land the easiest stuff & pass on the ones that are actually challenging.

The editing was rather decent, I personally enjoyed it, the time & weather you picked matched the song perfectly & the effects were really fitting. your angles also seem to be really smooth & consistent, so I don't know why you think you're bad. The only complaint from me would be the extensive usage of blur, it's ok if you want to sync it to every beat, but just listen to the beats & adjust the blur accordingly. What I'm trying to say is that at some parts the blur was really heavy even tho the beats were rather light, with lighter, more subtle blurs it'd have made the vid much more enjoyable & soothing, but your editing's great nonetheless, keep it up.
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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #18 on: June 24, 2011, 06:23:28 PM »
1. there are lots of other landings to this building, just watch some older vids
2. 00:47 has been done naturally with a slightly different run up, I'm surprised you didn't notice the obvious bump right in front of the building when doing this.
3. You did the same p2b with 3 different vehicles & 2 csm's that are almost the same except for the way they're set up, I wouldn't exactly call those different from one another.
4. The place where you did the p2bs, it can be used as a ramp to do a natural stunt, how could you not notice that?

You should've put more effort in this, seems like you only chose to land the easiest stuff & pass on the ones that are actually challenging.

The editing was rather decent, I personally enjoyed it, the time & weather you picked matched the song perfectly & the effects were really fitting. your angles also seem to be really smooth & consistent, so I don't know why you think you're bad. The only complaint from me would be the extensive usage of blur, it's ok if you want to sync it to every beat, but just listen to the beats & adjust the blur accordingly. What I'm trying to say is that at some parts the blur was really heavy even tho the beats were rather light, with lighter, more subtle blurs it'd have made the vid much more enjoyable & soothing, but your editing's great nonetheless, keep it up.
Oh man, ¡Thanks! is the best post on the topic :D , now it's not my roof pwnage is from one friend :p, yeah te edit is not bad but Cooper didn't like the edit and other he does not know not even put a fade out on the effects and I worried because I thought they would not like to many but what I liked them all, some mistakes but they learn and other reasons.thanks for the comment I was very pleased because I know my video editing is not so bad and try to improve bye.

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #19 on: June 24, 2011, 06:33:27 PM »
1. there are lots of other landings to this building, just watch some older vids
2. 00:47 has been done naturally with a slightly different run up, I'm surprised you didn't notice the obvious bump right in front of the building when doing this.
3. You did the same p2b with 3 different vehicles & 2 csm's that are almost the same except for the way they're set up, I wouldn't exactly call those different from one another.
4. The place where you did the p2bs, it can be used as a ramp to do a natural stunt, how could you not notice that?

You should've put more effort in this, seems like you only chose to land the easiest stuff & pass on the ones that are actually challenging.

The editing was rather decent, I personally enjoyed it, the time & weather you picked matched the song perfectly & the effects were really fitting. your angles also seem to be really smooth & consistent, so I don't know why you think you're bad. The only complaint from me would be the extensive usage of blur, it's ok if you want to sync it to every beat, but just listen to the beats & adjust the blur accordingly. What I'm trying to say is that at some parts the blur was really heavy even tho the beats were rather light, with lighter, more subtle blurs it'd have made the vid much more enjoyable & soothing, but your editing's great nonetheless, keep it up.
Oh man, ¡Thanks! is the best post on the topic :D , now it's not my roof pwnage is from one friend :p, yeah te edit is not bad but Cooper didn't like the edit and other he does not know not even put a fade out on the effects and I worried because I thought they would not like to many but what I liked them all, some mistakes but they learn and other reasons.thanks for the comment I was very pleased because I know my video editing is not so bad and try to improve bye.
what??
what do I have to do with this?
asshole
fucking jerk

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #20 on: June 24, 2011, 07:55:00 PM »
1. there are lots of other landings to this building, just watch some older vids
2. 00:47 has been done naturally with a slightly different run up, I'm surprised you didn't notice the obvious bump right in front of the building when doing this.
3. You did the same p2b with 3 different vehicles & 2 csm's that are almost the same except for the way they're set up, I wouldn't exactly call those different from one another.
4. The place where you did the p2bs, it can be used as a ramp to do a natural stunt, how could you not notice that?

You should've put more effort in this, seems like you only chose to land the easiest stuff & pass on the ones that are actually challenging.

The editing was rather decent, I personally enjoyed it, the time & weather you picked matched the song perfectly & the effects were really fitting. your angles also seem to be really smooth & consistent, so I don't know why you think you're bad. The only complaint from me would be the extensive usage of blur, it's ok if you want to sync it to every beat, but just listen to the beats & adjust the blur accordingly. What I'm trying to say is that at some parts the blur was really heavy even tho the beats were rather light, with lighter, more subtle blurs it'd have made the vid much more enjoyable & soothing, but your editing's great nonetheless, keep it up.
Oh man, ¡Thanks! is the best post on the topic :D , now it's not my roof pwnage is from one friend :p, yeah te edit is not bad but Cooper didn't like the edit and other he does not know not even put a fade out on the effects and I worried because I thought they would not like to many but what I liked them all, some mistakes but they learn and other reasons.thanks for the comment I was very pleased because I know my video editing is not so bad and try to improve bye.
what??
what do I have to do with this?
asshole
fucking jerk
In the conversation whit Ale i read.
*cancion vieja              -                old song
*los stunts son/estan(I did not see very well) ok          stunts are ok
*pero el edit es horrible              but the edit is horrible
*espero que no lo publique en gtas  i waiting falldress didn't post on gtastunting
« Last Edit: June 24, 2011, 08:22:02 PM by FallDress »

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #21 on: June 24, 2011, 08:03:21 PM »
Y???????????
YYY???????????????
QUE TIENE?
ES MI OPINION
DEJATE DE ROMPER LAS BOLAS
"gracias por los concejos pero a cooper no le gusto entonces..."
ojala que te mueras de un buen cancer

sorry for the spanish  :sleep:

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #22 on: June 24, 2011, 08:06:27 PM »
Y???????????
YYY???????????????
QUE TIENE?
ES MI OPINION
DEJATE DE ROMPER LAS BOLAS
"gracias por los concejos pero a cooper no le gusto entonces..."
ojala que te mueras de un buen cancer

sorry for the spanish  :sleep:
Das lástima :).

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #23 on: June 24, 2011, 08:18:12 PM »
Quote from: AJ Collins
11. Please use English when posting as this helps us moderate the forums better.

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #24 on: June 24, 2011, 08:20:23 PM »
Quote from: AJ Collins
11. Please use English when posting as this helps us moderate the forums better.
I use the spanish on this post 1 try so, no problem c:

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #25 on: June 24, 2011, 09:13:45 PM »
Why's everyone busting his ass? he's obviously not English and has difficulty expressing his opinion. Chill the fuck out people.

Anyways about the video. the editing was smooth but slightly out of sync, work on getting the beats to go with the stunts.
Some stunts seemed to be the same stunt done with different vehicles. Try to change up the stunts a little. This roof isn't very high and thus there are many creative ways you an get up there. Spending a little time trying ridiculous ideas sometimes inspires great ones. Play around, Vice city is a big play field. Don't be afraid to use it :)


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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #26 on: June 25, 2011, 08:54:17 AM »
Nice One
but hope that you make sure to read Roof Pwnage RULES here: http://www.gtastunting.net/index.php?topic=5862.0

 There is already a Roof Pwnage challenge going on here: http://www.gtastunting.net/index.php?topic=5862.2700

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #27 on: June 25, 2011, 09:03:01 AM »
you will need to close this shit coz you're only fucking up yourself, falldress

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #28 on: June 25, 2011, 09:18:20 AM »
Falldress For President :sleep:

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Re: Ale - Roof Pwnage #1
« Reply #29 on: June 25, 2011, 09:27:00 AM »
Nice One
but hope that you make sure to read Roof Pwnage RULES here: http://www.gtastunting.net/index.php?topic=5862.0

 There is already a Roof Pwnage challenge going on here: http://www.gtastunting.net/index.php?topic=5862.2700
IS NOT MY ROOF PWNAGE.

 

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