Not as bad editingwise, as some here portray it. As cw said, work on your angles, focus more on the stunts, try filming in angles where you can see the sky, the ground level & what's in front of the player. The editing itself had a nice flow, tho some of those tv sim's were pretty bad looking & interrupting, at some places it was hard to understand what's going on, try to show an entire stunts at least once, with out cutting it, but by just adding some rather light effects on the clip. Stuntingwise, it's pretty good for starters, you have your own ideas & that's great, keep doing what you do & gl in the future.