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Central Disposal
« on: September 19, 2010, 01:36:01 AM »
Well, GTAS obviously lacks leftover videos  :lol:
So I present to you Central Disposal - my lefti solo. The stunts in this vid are either re-landed stunts, stunts that have been re-landed, stunts that I had no idea were old & genuine leftovers, lame stunts.

Editing took me about 15h, mainly 'cause I spent most of the day recording, re-recording, re-re-recording etc each stunt with my $2 mouse with no mouse pad, and it still came out shit  :angry:
Towards the end of the video I was a bit tired of editing, and got a little lazy, but overall I got what I was going for, also, this is my first "pan/crop editing" so I'd like some feedback on what I should & shouldn't be doing, thanks  :happy:
Anyway, enjoy the vid!  :cc_detective:
I got rid of the pan/crop & useless fx   :ninja:

Central Disposal | HD (w/o pan/crop)
« Last Edit: September 19, 2010, 11:42:14 AM by Determined »

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 01:45:48 AM »
unwatchable

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 01:49:22 AM »
cool vid

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 01:50:33 AM »
unwatchable

Could you please at least tell me why?  :cheersad:
I rarely get constructive criticism & that's why I keep sucking at edits  :(

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 01:54:07 AM »
Enjoyed the editing.. hated the song.. stunts were cool  :ajaja:

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2010, 02:11:35 AM »
Work on ur cam angles and that pan cropp movements were rly annoying and useless.
Some nice stunts there tho.

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 02:16:02 AM »
Work on ur cam angles and that pan cropp movements were rly annoying and useless.
Some nice stunts there tho.

I can never make good angles, I always end up making shaky, lame angles  :(
I'll try to work on those pancrop effects & not overuse them, thanks for feedback  :happy:

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 02:16:08 AM »
Stuntwise,it was really cool.I loved some of the stunts.But man,what was wrong with that editing?In the first place,why don't you find some CLEAR angles that actually make the stunt visible?And why did you overuse those pancrop movements?Those 2 things really made the vid unwatchable.Just try to keep it clean because it's cooler all the time.4/5

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #8 on: September 19, 2010, 02:19:07 AM »
The ironic thing is, that I wanted it clean at first, but ended up screwing everything, I always try too hard & end up just fucking it up, I don't know, I can never make good angles, no matter how hard I try, I always make shakey angles that make the stunt look lame.
But I really appreciate the criticism, I'll try to work on those things, thanks  ;)

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 02:25:08 AM »
Just get the replay hotfix and try not to move the camera too much.Just find a good angle and try to focus on it.Make sure the bump/land/grind/whatever the stunt ivolves are are visible.And use the pancrop movements ONLY when it's really needed,not all the time.You don't have to try too hard since it's really easy to make something clean.Keep it up.
« Last Edit: September 19, 2010, 01:15:30 PM by KasT »

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #10 on: September 19, 2010, 02:25:42 AM »
cool video, stunting wise it was pretty cool, liked that LS hospital2Stoppie2Grind, looked very cool.. as for the editing it was decent, nothing really wrong with it but like everyone said work on your cam angles and you vid will be awesim  :ajaja: good vid overall  :ajaja:

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #11 on: September 19, 2010, 02:27:03 AM »
Thanks KasT, you're a life saver  :wub:
And thanks JC for the positive feedback  :cheernutz:

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #12 on: September 19, 2010, 06:14:20 AM »
i thought edit will bee good, but man what the fuck was that? that pan croping was deamn ugly dude, what were you thinking lol, u should reedit this,;)
cuz stunts were cool,so editing is not your cup of tea just how it`s with me :lol:
if i`d said i enjoyed it i`d lie, so yeh. Re edit it, and pan crop movements got to be unseen, but you made it like earthquake. some stunts were really cool like those two by that naked dude  :ninja: jk.

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #13 on: September 19, 2010, 06:22:04 AM »
i thought edit will bee good, but man what the fuck was that? that pan croping was deamn ugly dude, what were you thinking lol, u should reedit this,;)
cuz stunts were cool,so editing is not your cup of tea just how it`s with me :lol:
if i`d said i enjoyed it i`d lie, so yeh. Re edit it, and pan crop movements got to be unseen, but you made it like earthquake. some stunts were really cool like those two by that naked dude  :ninja: jk.

They are subtle on some parts  :ninja:
Like the beginning of 1st stunt.
I'm lazy to re-edit atm, I jsut might do it later, but then I'd have to re-record every stunt, and you know how that's like  :lol:
And I lost 1 replay, accidentally pressed f2 instead of f3  :(

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Re: Central Disposal
« Reply #14 on: September 19, 2010, 07:17:25 AM »
You should've called your video "Neck injury"

 

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