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Offline Veno

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Until the day i die.
« on: September 18, 2010, 02:06:16 AM »
hoy, i watched liljs edit test, and i wanted to edit something too  :euro:
so i did, i wasn`t bored i just wanted to edit, so i tryed something i never did before.
i made some mistakes too, but i was too lazy to fix it, yeh so watch and say me what should i do and what i shouldn`t do, so i can learn editing thanks  :euro:
feedback? :3

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2010, 02:09:08 AM »
Work on your angles :P
Didn't like the parts that were freezed, they seemed a bit too long, the colors & transitions were nice tho, the fx on the stunts seemed a bit random, and kinda repetitive, since those were only plain color fx, try adding some more variety.
It was nice yo  ;)

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2010, 03:54:18 AM »
fuckin awesome as i said in utube

just work on those angles

and show us more amazing stuff ;D

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 04:10:19 AM »
it was cool,except the camfucks

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 05:47:20 AM »
great intro  ;)

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 06:05:46 AM »
that seem a bit slow. Even if you tried to use fresh colors with fx, your gta is kind of grey whitie. Cams arent good at all but effects are well synced.

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 06:28:52 AM »
that seem a bit slow. Even if you tried to use fresh colors with fx, your gta is kind of grey whitie. Cams arent good at all but effects are well synced.
i didn`t used any of "video fx" except glow and blur.
and yes i know cam angles are bad, but hell i just don`t know how to make a good ones :/

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #7 on: September 18, 2010, 07:32:52 AM »
Get a life......... NO, DON'T GET ANY, I WANNA SEE MORE STUFF FROM YOU  :wub: :wub: YOU ARE AWESOME...





















cam angles sucked tho

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #8 on: September 18, 2010, 11:53:25 PM »
cam angles sucked.CC isn't that pleasent.The intro was original on GTAs :cc_detective: i love it.

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2010, 11:52:19 AM »
May I know the song? And I also could do a little editing test on that one and show you how you can improve. What kind of CC's and effects to use^^

Need the stunt then too! :)

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2010, 12:01:46 PM »
Story Of The Year - Until The Day I Die.

My choice btw   :happy:

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #11 on: September 21, 2010, 12:43:37 PM »
Ohai ESU Negative Passion : >
Cool editing

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #12 on: September 21, 2010, 02:15:52 PM »
You remind me old times with this song, sad too much things change...

put efforts on your cam angles man  :happy:

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Re: Until the day i die.
« Reply #13 on: October 04, 2010, 03:07:45 AM »
cant watch it cuz iam in tha sochool whatch it when go home

 

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