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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #735 on: July 29, 2011, 05:51:15 PM »
The only thing I disliked about the Porn one, were the texts, just way too random, otherwise really great usage of effects, beautiful angles & great pan/cropping, I like your style.

We normally request a vid that's at least one minute long to qualify as an audition, but I think I've seen enough + it ain't easy to edit with one hand, so I'm sure we can give you some relief.

Yes from me.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #736 on: July 29, 2011, 06:32:22 PM »
Escalated Violence Audition - [Waiting Result]




Is SHITTTTYYY
But tomorrow i upload other more BETTER
So, I see, suck editing on this :(

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #737 on: July 29, 2011, 06:45:29 PM »
Don't put a flash on every beat, it's just disturbinng, try more natural synching, use the environment. And work on those flashes, that one looked pretty bad, didn't fit in at all. Loving your angles man, tho that last one was overdone.
you also have a nice flow to vids, just don't try so hard with the effects, your vids are currently better without them, those skills will come with time.

Dunno if I'll have the time to watch the other audi tomorrow, have to reformat+sell my pc, so I'll be absent for a while.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #738 on: July 29, 2011, 06:52:22 PM »
I vote Yes to WOS & No to FallDress.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #739 on: July 29, 2011, 06:54:18 PM »
He said that he'd make a better one tomorrow. he's pobably here for feedback so he can do his best on the real thing.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #740 on: July 29, 2011, 07:05:36 PM »
He said that he'd make a better one tomorrow. he's pobably here for feedback so he can do his best on the real thing.
I'm saying No to his current Audition, hopefully he does better tomorrow ;)

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #741 on: July 29, 2011, 07:07:59 PM »
I meant that as in, he wants feedback on his current editing, so he knows what not to do & what to improve on with the one he'll make tomorrow.
Why else would he post a vid saying that he'd post a better one later?  :lol:

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #742 on: July 29, 2011, 07:09:41 PM »
I meant that as in, he wants feedback on his current editing, so he knows what not to do & what to improve on with the one he'll make tomorrow.
Why else would he post a vid saying that he'd post a better one later?  :lol:
I guess so, anyway my feedback towards his audition is exactly the same as what you said Determined.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #743 on: July 29, 2011, 07:30:22 PM »
I know the posts
I meant that as in, he wants feedback on his current editing, so he knows what not to do & what to improve on with the one he'll make tomorrow.
Why else would he post a vid saying that he'd post a better one later?  :lol:
Because i'm bored, You know?

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #744 on: July 29, 2011, 07:58:28 PM »
damn my audi is 2 yes and 2 no, someone call shiffttee lol

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #745 on: July 30, 2011, 03:19:18 AM »
WOS:

If you promise not to do a completly overdone CC as on the Daro video again and calm down with your effects using as on PORN (many new blue effects are awful) (so is tv simulator mostly).

Yes cause we need activity.

FallDress:

Please work on your camera angles. I hate camfucks. Also a few camera movements were sloppy as hell. Liked the effects tho. There was no CC and the intro was boring.

No.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #746 on: July 30, 2011, 03:37:08 AM »
When i send this > WoS League - Match 16 - Afterlife Versus BlackDeath as audi, i must made only EV audi.
And when WOS post his last videos he musn't make EV audi. ?

Where is the fairness Felix ?

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #747 on: July 30, 2011, 03:44:10 AM »
WoS League - Match 16 - Afterlife Versus BlackDeath as audi, i must made only EV audi.
And when WOS post his last videos he musn't make EV audi. ?

Where is the fairness Felix ?
We normally request a vid that's at least one minute long to qualify as an audition, but I think I've seen enough + it ain't easy to edit with one hand, so I'm sure we can give you some relief.

Just stating my own reasons.

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #748 on: July 30, 2011, 03:52:08 AM »
WoS League - Match 16 - Afterlife Versus BlackDeath as audi, i must made only EV audi.
And when WOS post his last videos he musn't make EV audi. ?

Where is the fairness Felix ?
We normally request a vid that's at least one minute long to qualify as an audition, but I think I've seen enough + it ain't easy to edit with one hand, so I'm sure we can give you some relief.

Just stating my own reasons.
ou, sorry man. I haven't readed this. 
relief ? thanks so much, but when you want any longer vid.
Here > 1nsane - Blue Life [Re-Edit]
What do you mean ? :)

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Re: Escalated Violence
« Reply #749 on: July 30, 2011, 03:56:06 AM »
I say no for a single reason: camfucks, both vids are jsut packed with them

Also I disliked the colors on the 2nd vid & it generally didn't have any atmosphere in it, seemed rather dull.

 

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