I will use your template as I am lazy (late post be damned). I incorporated my editing comments into each stunt since that is main purpose of editing: to show what is cool about the onscreen action
Full review of IN YOUR FACE, by Deep Voyagers
made by kr3m-A-LIN
Intro: Not much to the intro but still nice for what it is. I like short intros but that was maybe a bit too brief
Stunts:
FloW (0:18-0:33): Cool idea, but the editing angle obscure what was coolest about the stunt which is the air to the grind
krs (0:33-0:40): Nice infernus air, nothing more to say really
vmx (0:41-0:55): Nice cut with the music to bring this stunt in. Cool stunt with a lucky looking landing but again a more zoomed out view would've made it more impressive
GDL (0:56-1:03): Stylish rotation, I really dig this stunt
Sear (1:04-1:12): I'm not a big air kind of stunter so this is just another roof from a bump to me
MeetMyMeat (1:12-1:27): Cool stunt, a nice idea with good editing (maybe 1 too many cuts though), again I feel like a slightly more zoomed out camera would give you a better view (personal taste?)
Genyus (1:27-1:42): I like this stunt, it is a precision landing and has a great setup that shows you put alot of thought into it
krs (1:43-1:50): Another good infernus air from you, I'm guessing you are a car stunter mostly
PtRvY (1:51-2:05): It was cool stunt, but I'm baffled why the editing emphasized the grind when the bump is probably more interesting, especially since so far a bunch of stunts have had double takes without any real effect to it
FloW (2:06-2:19): Nice looking stunt with an accidental bit of flair of the door closing
Sear (2:20-2:29): Another high bump....
vmx (2:30-2:38): Cool precision landing, nice editing effects for the breakdown of the song
FloW (2:39-2:51): The camming on this stunt when in the air made it really hard to see exactly what was happening
Genyus (2:53-3:07): Big packerbump....maybe a hard runup made the stunt a better one
Sear (3:08-3:15): Nice line to the stunt, still a bump but it showed some complexity beyond straight runup and launch
vmx (3:16-3:23): pretty cool air
Genyus (3:24-3:45): big air, probably really hard but nothing amazingly new to it
Outro: Nice song in the outro, a bit long though....nice little bit of humor in the mods credit
Overall:
I liked this video guys, you have a good variety of stunting types and skills, hopefully more vehicles will be used in other videos you guys make. The editing was generally pretty good, outside of things I mentioned in the stunts I found that you used double takes a bit too often. They felt like they were filling time up on the song rather than being used as a special way to show off a cool or complex stunt. I'd rather see more stunts or a shorter song than feeling this way. A great effort guys, best of luck with other videos
