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Offline foil

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Foil's PCJ
« on: November 29, 2009, 03:59:16 AM »
First PCJ i made




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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2009, 04:01:52 AM »
Even though you started out with someone elses skin and wen on from there, it's not a bad 1st skin.

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2009, 04:03:48 AM »
i didnot copy others Skin, it's 100% me :), Thanks Overall

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2009, 04:05:57 AM »
Cool bike but it kinda looks like my NRG (not very much but it does a bit), I love those brakes but the body could be more HQ, the licence plate.. meh could be better.

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2009, 04:06:51 AM »
it's my 1st bike so please understand

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2009, 04:46:17 AM »
i want this brakes :Q

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #6 on: November 29, 2009, 04:55:00 AM »
 :lol: :hmm:

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2009, 05:24:55 AM »
Nice brakes..

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #8 on: November 29, 2009, 05:37:25 AM »
nice bike ;D

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2009, 06:55:18 AM »
i didnot copy others Skin, it's 100% me :), Thanks Overall

Why would it be 100% yours cuz the wheels are from Paytons remake? ( Brakes are yours though obv lol  :P )

Body looks cool but LQ  :ajaja:

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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2009, 08:19:48 AM »
Those would be my wheels you're using foil.  No biggie though, it comes with that model.  It's just that it's not totally and completely 100% yours.

Next time up the resolution on your graphics.  You can go at least 1024 pixels instead of 128 or even 64.  Just don't let your TXD get over 19MB.  The game will start concentrating on your bike more than the surroundings, and everything will start to blink in and out.

Next time try not to go tribal.  Concentrate on specific parts of the bike and design a look for them.  Tribal's are so overused, and the UV stretching on the bike makes them suck even more.

Pretty good for a first model.  I hope to see improvement and more creativity in the next one.




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Re: Foil's PCJ
« Reply #11 on: December 01, 2009, 04:34:23 AM »
Thanks, :mellow:

 

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