Event Horizon

[numdmind]

Ok guys, TGA finally got this posted.  I don't know what the deal is, but everytime I try to upload there, i get some kind of problem.  I'm sure it's something I've done wrong, but in any case bloodymess was kind enough to fix the problem for me again.  Anyway, here's the link:

http://www.thegamersalliance.com/dynamic.p...ventHorizon.zip

any feedback would be great, thanks.
numdmind

[kr3mlin]

On a computer at uni, will d/l when i get home and post then, am looking forward to it

[InsaNe]

Dwnlding

Editing needs work.. And texts should be readable cos the fonts on begin and end were horrible. And try to have sum nice effects on it too.

Editing 6/10

Stunts were good, but you should leave only big gaps and airs into the video.

Stunts 8/10  - Minus from little stunts, Plus from big airs.

Its overall good video but i suggest, you get Sony Video Vegas 5 or 6
and leave only big gaps and airs onto video.

Overall 7/10

Keep working man    

[numdmind]

yeah, i know the titles sucked, but all i have is imovie, which i don't understand.  I know of a few other people who use the same software i'm using and their titles look great.  Do they even make Vegas for us Mac people?  I'm sure they do...i'll check into that.  Thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it.

[Docta Luv]

That was a really good video dude.  Editing had some issues, but the stunts were awesome.  I think you should't do just long gaps and stuff, you gotta do the little stuff too, otherwise there's no variety.

8/10

[InsaNe]

I think you should't do just long gaps and stuff, you gotta do the little stuff too,

Little things are bad cos they doesn't have any challenge and little stunts aren't great to watch    

[Omni]

A cool vid! Nice music..Good to have a change from Rammstein once in a while! Sadly there was too many fillers but some pretty cool ideas and Packer Bumps! The editing i thought was very good as it had a LOT of synching and knowing myself how bad imovie is too edit with
Nice job man, keep it up!!!

[kr3mlin]

Points i found with ur vid
- the intro font was cool
- the intro was low rez as some have pointed out - final cut pro on mac is an excellent editor
- i like the music, good to see some variety over the metal (and i love metal) that is in alot of vids
- Editing needs a bit of work- a better editor with more options is the way to go. The scene missing edit was nice tho
-Based on the readme you had alot of stunts: try to be harsh with whatever your using so you get 30 great stunts rather than 30 great stunts that are weighed down by 30 that arent the best
-The stunts that were good i really liked, some nice big airs
-Next time go for some grinds or A2g so far they have not been done much (and the fact the SA makes it a bit harder means any good ones will really stand out) and they will give variety
-Standout stunts for me were at 0:50 (cos it was cool), 0:53, 1:21, 2:21, 2:28 (nice roofing with the bmx), 2:59, 3:42, 4:26
- Finally you should finish on a strong stunt, that dirtbike small wall bump wasnt it.

Score: 6.5/10

I look forward to future vids and i hope that these comments help

Cheers

On a side note: what is that logo?

[numdmind]

the logo?  if you mean the smiley face thing i threw in there, it's mine for my recording studio.  it's a happy face with an oi.  i came up with it like 12 years ago or so.  there's a small pic of it attached to the post, or there should be.
thanks for the detailed critique, i'll certainly keep all of that in mind while i'm working on my next one.
i'm always trying to find some better editing software, i'm just extremely poor.  i'll look into final cut pro, i've heard lots about it, i just always forget...heh  i really need to get a better way of getting video to my computer than analogue and a vcr.
thanks again for the tips.

[kr3mlin]

Happy to be of assistance

[DeathCobra]

Not bad man.
Editing:8/10
Good Synching and liked the text at the start.

Music:9/10
Way better than In GTA We Trust and good to get away from System of a Down.

Stunts7/10
Use less filler and mabe learn how to stunt in cars

Overall:8/10
Good vid.Room for improvment.
 

[NightKnight]

Event Horizon is a great movie. Horrifying sci-fi

[numdmind]

yeah...i work at a video store and i just saw the movie event horizon after i posted this.  i was gonna rent it, but i wasn't sure if it'd be any good.  i guess since i get the movies for free anyway, it couldn't hurt right.

thanks death cobra for the inputs.  i plan on stunting more in cars for my next vid, but right now i'm working on another project and plus my ps2 quit on me, so it'll be a few weeks before i get back to stunting.  which is very sad...very very sad.  there will be less filler in the next one i guarantee.

[jono_samosir]

Yea good vid. Kept me entertained. I luved the one wer u got cleared the flood thingie. That was krazy.