Author Topic: Overdraft (Read 7400 times)

Tackleberry · « **Reply #45 on:** December 10, 2007, 03:44:28 PM »

Quote from: THEFTman

You have just kicked Daffy in the face....

If either you or Daffy think it's like that, you both take this way too serious. Just let people have their own opinions.

THEFTman · « **Reply #46 on:** December 10, 2007, 03:47:42 PM »

It's all about comparing and nothing more...

I don't care if you can't take my critism anyway, I just tell you what I didn't like, every great movie have it's suck parts...

Tackleberry · « **Reply #47 on:** December 10, 2007, 03:53:39 PM »

Quote from: THEFTman

It's all about comparing and nothing more...

I don't care if you can't take my critism anyway, I just tell you what I didn't like, every great movie have it's suck parts...

Yeah, but what I talked about now was your criticsm towards people who like the movie, not your criticism towards the movie it self.

THEFTman · « **Reply #48 on:** December 10, 2007, 04:02:16 PM »

yea, well, sorry, it was just some thoughts...

Rod · « **Reply #49 on:** December 10, 2007, 04:19:13 PM »

That infernus wallride2grind was awesome

Macsta · « **Reply #50 on:** December 10, 2007, 04:34:34 PM »

Overdraft : review by Macsta619

Intro : I quite liked the intro, nice, simple and enjoyable. Good job.

Main :

>Wavez 01:05-01:13 : Really easy and old, i was expecting a really good opener
>Lyserg 01:14-01:20 : Well executed, but no need for the ground grab
>Bender 01:21-01:39 : Great execution, nice bump and hit the rail perfectly, good job on getting the whole rail
>Wavez 01:40-01:47 : Old, but nice execution, but would of been better if u stayed on the pink roof
>Evil Man 01:48-01:52 : Nice BSM, nothing special, but nice height and good landing
>Herr-Dav' 01:53-01:58 : Well executed, but would of been SO much better if u didn't get stuck
>Vitalic 01:59-02:02 : Old, but well done getting a nice angle and good landing
>Lyserg 02:03-02:08 : Very old, but nicely done, good landing
>Herr-Dav' 02:09-02:19 : Great boost dude, great landing, i loved this stunt
>Lyserg 02:20-02:30 : Nicely done, but the ground grab was NOT needed, but nicely executed
>Darkyy 02:31-02:36 : Great bump, nice height and especially with a freeway, nicely done
>Vintage 02:37-02:44 : Was that 2 packers i saw in the background? Anyway, nicely done, great angle for the grind, bad luck u didn't get the whole rail
>Vitalic 02:45-02:51 : Remember the 2 car rule, 1. PCJ 2. Packer 3. Boat, but nice landing
>Vintage 02:52-02:57 : Nicely done, but the packer on the roof and the ground grab was not needed, 2 car rule
>Vitalic 02:58-03:02 : Great BSM, nice angle and nice landing, good height aswell, good job
>Darkyy 03:03-03:10 : Nicely executed, but the whole rail would of been better, but nice work
>Herr-Dav' 03:11-03:20 : Great creativity, nicely done and good landing, nice thinking
>Darkyy 03:21-03:25 : Nice bump in that location, also u landed the roof well, nice job
>Lyserg 03:26-03:30 : Old, but well done getting a good angle for the ledge grind
>Darkyy 03:31-03:35 : OMG, nice BSM, great height, angle and landing, good work
>Bender 03:36-03:42 : Very old method, but it was quite well executed
>Herr-Dav' 03:43-03:51 : Massive boost, great height, distance and landing, nice job
>Darkyy 03:52-04:01 : Quite an old stunt, but well done getting a good angle for the grind and nice landing
>Vitalic 04:02-04:06 : Nice BSM, good height and landing, but remember the 2 car rule
>Bender 04:07-04:11 : Old spot, nice execution, but try to stay on the bike next time
>Herr-Dav' 04:12-04:24 : Nice boost, i have seen better from there, but you got good distance and had a great landing
>Vintage 04:25-04:31 : OMG, why break the 2 car rule for that?
>Lyserg 04:32-04:37 : Old BSM, but well executed and well landed
>Herr-Dav' 04:38-04:47 : Nice grind, but nothing special
>Darkyy 04:48-04:54 : Great bump from the traffic lights, also nice landing
>Bender 04:55-05:03 : Great execution, but dont break the 2 car rule
>Darkyy 05:04-05:15 : Great height off that BSM, good landing on a tough roof, nice finisher

Outro :

>Darkyy 05:25-05:36 : I lost this stunt to you, but well executed and nice landing
>Herr-Dav' 05:36-05:50 : Nothing special about that AG, you got back on the bike when you hit the ground
>Wavez 05:51-05:59 : Old spot and didnt need the ground grab at the end, but nicely done
>Lyserg 06:00-06:13 : Nice BSM, with a very lucky landing
>Herr-Dav' 06:13-06:26 : OMG, huge boost, nice job
>Darkyy 06:27-06:36 : Nice bump, with a great landing, nice work

Conclusion :

In my opinion, there were parts of this vid that shouldn't of been in it, like the few ground grabs and the stunts that broke the 2 car rule, but i didn't make it. So nice work on most of the stunts. The edting was not the best, but deffinatly not the worst, just a bit over edited, dont worry dude you will get better. The music was ok, not my favorite, but worked well with the vid, so good work with that. I think we can expect great things from BWS in the future, just work on your editing a bit, music selection, dont break the 2 car rule and dont ground grab. Nice vid dudes, 6.5/10.

brandon6199 · « **Reply #51 on:** December 10, 2007, 05:14:51 PM »

ground grabs are gay

ok vid, kinda reminded me of NANSV

hachi · « **Reply #52 on:** December 10, 2007, 06:09:33 PM »

Yeah

Daffy · « **Reply #53 on:** December 10, 2007, 06:27:00 PM »

Quote from: Flat Face

daffy its not about impessing vets its about making the video look cool glow does that alot of the time so its a good effect

The glow effect is like having sex, shouldn't be done/used all the time so you won't stop appreciating it... one word: overkill.
Don't try to fucking teach me how to edit, you evil n00bian you.

Quote from: Herr-Dav

Btw, I realized that the youtube version is whiter than MQ or XQ, if you based your critics on it
Lyserg & Vintage will be spanked for ground grabbing, don't worry

I did use the YouTube version, i'll DL the XQ for a 2nd opinion, the glow is white though... i don't see how white can get whiter than white.
And you, sir, should also be spanked for use thing ground-grabs.

Quote from: THEFTman

You have just kicked Daffy in the face....

My face feels fine though
Anyway, i agree with your opinion THEFTman but repeating it over and over enforcing it, instead of sharing it makes you look at that fact instead your actual point which isn't a bad one.

Flat Face · « **Reply #54 on:** December 10, 2007, 06:44:24 PM »

Quote from: Daffy

Quote from: Flat Face
daffy its not about impressing vets its about making the video look cool glow does that alot of the time so its a good effect
The glow effect is like having sex, shouldn't be done/used all the time so you won't stop appreciating it... one word: overkill.

yeah thats how i feel =P

Avant · « **Reply #55 on:** December 10, 2007, 06:45:31 PM »

Decent video , some great stunts..i felt glow was maybe a tad overdone. other than that .Nice Job

MaCi · « **Reply #56 on:** December 11, 2007, 02:09:12 AM »

Really liked the editing, good job.
Stunts were mostly old but I don't care a shit, they were real good.
Loved the music.
Good job guys.

9/10

JPJP · « **Reply #57 on:** December 11, 2007, 05:46:42 AM »

yeah. not bad (7/10)

Dejv · « **Reply #58 on:** December 11, 2007, 06:05:55 AM »

it pwn
i like it too much
Keep going

Nyqual · « **Reply #59 on:** December 11, 2007, 06:10:59 AM »

I enoyed again your intros and editing. You are pwnage Herr'Dav again video with realy good editing. Maybe some stutns were old but its better using new stunts in solos than collabs.

9/10