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Offline TheShadowOfTheKnight

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« on: February 04, 2005, 03:10:55 AM »
Constructive Criticism please

Download here: http://www.thegamersalliance.com/dynamic.p...e_City_Live.zip

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« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2005, 04:33:34 AM »
16mb!!! Thank god, I'll download it dude.

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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2005, 05:41:57 AM »
very disipointing, dude if you are gonna make a video spend time on it, the stunts look like it took 2 mins to do them

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« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2005, 07:06:34 AM »
Downloading.


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What was the point? Just some 360's and some 1-flips? Dude, take a look at our videos, and learn. I didn't like it.

2/10 (2 = Music)
« Last Edit: February 04, 2005, 07:13:58 AM by marklund »

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« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2005, 07:35:49 AM »
That didn't sound very constructive... :reallymad:

Reminded me a lot of my first video! Take more time on your next video, find a stunt and keep trying it until it looks perfect. Have a look at some other videos and try and emulate the styles of stunts, and find out what you enjoy doing, and what you think looks good. Pay attention to what other people say about the videos made by other people, and put some more variety in. Have a look through the challenge section, especially the earlier stuff.

If you haven't already, look up some of the tutorial videos around, but remember that these are the basics of stunting.

On the plus side there was a lot more vehicle variety than we normally see, which was good to see, and I recognised some of those stunts as stuff people were doing 7 or 8 months ago.
« Last Edit: February 04, 2005, 07:37:23 AM by comaboy »

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« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2005, 08:33:40 AM »
i didnt like the music really.. But hey.. its ur first vid.  :D  So just keep on trying. Everyone's first vid is crap.. But seriously.. U've gotta move on to more hardcore stunts. U dont put in stuff that are not amazing. And you got too many car stunts. Too many. Plus those hit wall and pick up bike. They are not airgrabs dude. They are just normal pick up bike after a fall.  :blink:  And explore different places too.. Keep trying man. I'll be looking forward to ur 2nd vid.  ;)  

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« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2005, 10:34:40 PM »
what did u expect  
the music was not my fault the lan screwed up so i couldn't transfer my good songs
myself would have rated it 3/20

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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2005, 06:37:09 AM »
I personally didn't think it to be that bad a first vid! Ok the stunts weren't top notch and most stuff, including the editing was average but isn't that what is to be expected from a first vid!? anyways, a not bad first vid 6/10! :canadian:  

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« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2005, 07:21:11 AM »
Isn`t the best ive seen to say it that way, it was not that bad for your first movie, you should have seen mine, lol.  :P  

 

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