Author Topic: Goregrind Song... (Read 2767 times)

Eric · « **on:** September 14, 2007, 02:08:09 PM »

Living Carcass

Rotting flesh, entombed
fermented eye balls exhumed
with a fork extract them and boil
them in an excrete rusted pot

Frantic disembowlment
with disgusting pus, vomiting
from alcoholic fumes
and solvent snorting

Anal tract fermenting
with the maggots rotting
the flesh, eating through the walls
and making a living carcass
Out of you.

(guitar solo)

Bleeding of the anus
vomiting the remains of the flesh
of your intestines, your teeth fall one by one
your embodiment of the living, this rotting disease
the horrible stench in your carcass
now you lie dead.

a tribute to Carcass, fucking br00tal band.

comments?

Olin · « **Reply #1 on:** September 14, 2007, 02:25:23 PM »

Turn this in asap to your poetry teacher.

Eric · « **Reply #2 on:** September 14, 2007, 02:47:37 PM »

Quote from: Olin

Turn this in asap to your poetry teacher.

I shall, she shall faint.

Ruchy · « **Reply #3 on:** September 14, 2007, 03:37:51 PM »

Awesome. How did you think about this?

Eric · « **Reply #4 on:** September 14, 2007, 03:41:46 PM »

Quote from: Ruchy

Awesome. How did you think about this?

listening to loads and LOADS of Carcass.

Paxton · « **Reply #5 on:** September 15, 2007, 03:21:04 AM »

Deep, good job.

Eric · « **Reply #6 on:** September 15, 2007, 08:56:00 AM »

thank you, thank you, you guys are awesome.

Auzas · « **Reply #7 on:** September 15, 2007, 09:00:12 AM »

Omg, i listen to rap, but this is fucking nice

Rocka · « **Reply #8 on:** September 15, 2007, 09:50:04 AM »

I was eating a donut when I read that. Thanks Eric. : |

Eric · « **Reply #9 on:** September 15, 2007, 09:55:23 AM »

Quote from: Rocka

I was eating a donut when I read that. Thanks Eric. : |

you're sickly welcome.

Kenny · « **Reply #10 on:** September 15, 2007, 10:02:15 AM »

There are no solos in goregrind.

Eric · « **Reply #11 on:** September 15, 2007, 10:11:54 AM »

Quote from: Kenny

There are no solos in goregrind.

in my world there are.

Kenny · « **Reply #12 on:** September 15, 2007, 10:20:12 AM »

Optical · « **Reply #13 on:** September 15, 2007, 10:40:04 AM »

Carcass was very good band and your song is awesome.

Eric · « **Reply #14 on:** September 15, 2007, 10:41:19 AM »

Quote from: Optical

Carcass was very good band and your song is awesome.

yeah I know, they were freakin' awesome, thanks btw.