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« on: August 25, 2007, 04:55:47 PM »
My Second Solo Stunt Video.

YouTube Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5fAB2Po5xz4

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« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2007, 04:56:32 PM »
watching

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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2007, 05:06:27 PM »
alright video, the start wasn't very appealing though man. slowly sliding down a rail isn't the best way to start off a video. it's also comprised of way too many bsms, but some were decent. you also had some cool natural bumps. anyways, keep stunting.
« Last Edit: August 25, 2007, 05:10:04 PM by Ramboyf5 »

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« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2007, 05:08:12 PM »
This is the worst stunt vid i've seen come out this year... Terrible way to start a video with a 5fps grind

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« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2007, 05:08:19 PM »
Nothing wrong with the stunts at all, they were great, and that bsm near the beginning with the massive spinnage was brilliant.  However, your editing could use a little work, that video could've been about 2/3 minutes long.  Try not to show the player and bike for ages after you've landed the stunt, it gets boring and drags along a bit.  Wait for about a second or two, then switch to the next stunt, it'll make your vids more interesting and fun to watch.  Also, leave out the slow grind next time and make sure the camera doesn't mash through the scenery when you're recording, if it happens, stop recording and do it again properly.

Keep up the stunts though, that was damn good for a second solo .
« Last Edit: August 25, 2007, 05:09:33 PM by VenomX »

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« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2007, 05:58:13 PM »
Stunts were very easy and editing not good, music was OK.
And too many BSM'S.  5/10

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« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2007, 06:08:48 PM »
x2 it was okay you got potential keep it up and play around with your editing a bit.

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« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2007, 01:18:06 AM »
this is very very very bad "stunt" movie...
sorry guy

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« Reply #8 on: August 26, 2007, 01:36:12 AM »
Nice one! I didn't like the first slow grind but some of the bsm's were crazy. Sanchez bump and grind at airport roof was nice aswell, especially for a new stunter like you . I'm not a big fan of that song but it worked well. Good job, hope to see more.

8.5/10
« Last Edit: August 26, 2007, 01:36:41 AM by Inwa »

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« Reply #9 on: August 26, 2007, 01:41:55 AM »
Quote from: fedex
this is very very very bad "stunt" movie...
sorry guy

And how can you say that, You havent even made one.


Anyway was OK, Try to land igher BSMs and Vary the stunts abit.

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« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2007, 02:45:47 AM »
Many easy many bad and many old stunt
sorry
2/10

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« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2007, 03:10:43 AM »
Why do you have custom sparks when you fucking ABSOLUTELY FUCKING SUCK ASS THROUGH A STRAW AT GRINDING?

Editing was also horrible, though the non-overusage of effects was okay. The space you leave after you finish a stunt is extremely annoying, no one wants to admire your shit bike that you use. What were you thinking, a 5 fucking FPS grind to start off the video, thats just fucking plain stupid, fucking start off a video with a good stunt.

Some of your BSMs were okay, but most of them were shit. BSM at the printing was okay though. Try variety instead of suck.


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  • WHEELIE2GRINDS ARE NOT FUCKING IMPRESSIVE.
  • Stop Typing Like This
  • Next time when you make a video, don't just put BSMs in.
  • stop using the rolleyes smiley you fucking suck too much not to annoy people when you use it.
Hey, atleast I'm not bitching about old stunts like most of you stupid ass fuckers do.






try fucking harder next time.

also, this is the most constructive post in this topic.
« Last Edit: August 26, 2007, 03:22:36 AM by Kenny »

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« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2007, 07:28:32 AM »
Awesome comment Kenny  
I didn't like it, editing was horrible and most of stunts were old. And I didn't like the music too.

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« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2007, 02:03:19 PM »
Quote from: Inwa
Nice one! I didn't like the first slow grind but some of the bsm's were crazy. Sanchez bump and grind at airport roof was nice aswell, especially for a new stunter like you . I'm not a big fan of that song but it worked well. Good job, hope to see more.

8.5/10


      no bad
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« Reply #14 on: August 27, 2007, 10:36:28 AM »
sry this was shitty

 

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