Author Topic: Some poetry I wrote... (Read 3621 times)

Rocka · « **Reply #15 on:** August 14, 2007, 10:20:31 PM »

I got one for you:
"Why don't you shut the fuck up?"

Kidding. That was pretty cool dude, gotta say. I wrote a poem before, like yesterday. Go on myspace, and look at the bulletin. It's not as artistic as this.... but you'll see.

Ph33r · « **Reply #16 on:** August 15, 2007, 06:48:13 AM »

Dude.. That was one of the best I've read so far.. Great work.. Eric the Poet FTW!

Eric · « **Reply #17 on:** August 15, 2007, 08:10:41 AM »

haha thanks guys and Rocka, I did read it and it was a great laugh to tell you the truth.

Rocka · « **Reply #18 on:** August 15, 2007, 01:18:57 PM »

Thanks buddy.

Eric · « **Reply #19 on:** August 15, 2007, 09:23:25 PM »

you're welcome alright guys keep em coming!

Slaughtered · « **Reply #20 on:** August 16, 2007, 10:02:48 AM »

We make a deal , we keep our comments coming if you keep your writing coming d00d.

Eric · « **Reply #21 on:** August 16, 2007, 01:05:32 PM »

Quote from: StuntX

We make a deal , we keep our comments coming if you keep your writing coming d00d.

done deal, lets see when inspiration strikes me again.

Ferσή · « **Reply #22 on:** August 16, 2007, 05:17:36 PM »

inspiration for what its just a buncha words jumbled together to seem "symbolic"

Eric · « **Reply #23 on:** August 16, 2007, 05:27:36 PM »

Quote from: Feron

inspiration for what its just a buncha words jumbled together to seem "symbolic"

well to get that symbolism and to get those "buncha words" to "jumble together" nicely and in a way that it actually means something, you need to have inspiration.

Slaughtered · « **Reply #24 on:** August 17, 2007, 12:45:47 AM »

If what eric wrote in his first post is 'just a buncha words thrown together' , Nitzkit is human. At actually takes skill , time and effort to come up with that. And inspiration IS what you need.

Nitro · « **Reply #25 on:** August 17, 2007, 12:59:26 PM »

Nice, good work Eric

Eric · « **Reply #26 on:** August 17, 2007, 04:03:53 PM »

Quote from: Nitro

Nice, good work Eric

thank you, thank you.

Torque · « **Reply #27 on:** August 17, 2007, 04:31:15 PM »

Some really good stuff Eric, you've touched me in a way with your words - ways that I don't wanna be touched.

Eric · « **Reply #28 on:** August 17, 2007, 06:35:45 PM »

Quote from: Torque

Some really good stuff Eric, you've touched me in a way with your words - ways that I don't wanna be touched.

I aim to please and pleasure

jessrocked · « **Reply #29 on:** August 17, 2007, 06:54:59 PM »

get lost... i mean, great work ::

ah,no,get lost really