Wow, you got seriously potential dude , Some oldies but i also saw some new ones.
But anyway, there is some things you need to think about for your second vid, its great that you have noticed the Video FX part in Vegas, the thing is just that you use it way to mutch man try to not use that many efects.
The music wherent anything i noticed at all, try to get better music next time
Besides that this where a great first vid and your going to become a great VC stunter if you keep this spirit up.
7\10
Awsome first vid man