Author Topic: Corruption (Read 2397 times)

Vicarious · « **on:** June 09, 2007, 04:35:37 AM »

My first GTA:VC video.

Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

The reason i have 2 different skins is because i changed half way through the video and couldnt be bothered to re-record the stunts, so sorry if i cause any confusion.

Youtube Link

ATM i only have a youtube link because i dont think the vid is worth downloading, i just want to get some constructive criticism to improve my stunting, but if needed i guess i can upload on TGA.

Spoofy · « **Reply #1 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:39:36 AM »

Haven't seen you stunt so I guess, watching.

Vicarious · « **Reply #2 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:42:06 AM »

Quote from: Spoof

Haven't seen you stunt so I guess, watching.

thats pretty much the only reason i uploaded this, so people can see where abouts i am in the stunting world and to help me improve.

DriZzly · « **Reply #3 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:50:27 AM »

i liked it

imo it was pretty good for a first attempt...
but u should try to get some variation in ur stunts...there were many P2Bs

keep it up dude

Vicarious · « **Reply #4 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:52:43 AM »

Quote from: DriZzly

i liked it

imo it was pretty good for a first attempt...
but u should try to get some variation in ur stunts...there were many P2Bs

keep it up dude

yea, IMO p2b's are my best stunt...really need practise on grinds/taxi boosting/airgrabs(didnt have any in the vid).
Ill try to improve them in the meantime.

Thanks for the comment.

Spoofy · « **Reply #5 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:58:47 AM »

I see you have a future in this. The stunts were fairly good and the editing was pretty nice too. Next time don't give us an option for a YouTube link so we have no choice but to download the high quality one. Low quality cuts down the quality of the stunts in the viewers eye.

Vicarious · « **Reply #6 on:** June 09, 2007, 05:26:27 AM »

Quote from: Spoof

I see you have a future in this. The stunts were fairly good and the editing was pretty nice too. Next time don't give us an option for a YouTube link so we have no choice but to download the high quality one. Low quality cuts down the quality of the stunts in the viewers eye.

Ill keep that in mind next time i create a vid...

and TBH i didnt put much effort into the editing, i sort of rushed it...but it seems you can barely tell the difference.

Caio · « **Reply #7 on:** June 09, 2007, 06:14:31 AM »

I liked it, bt like they said, lots of p2bs, but they were nice, I liked the pizzaboy one, I like that flatbed bump too

Like it was said, try different methods, you got nice skills

VenomX · « **Reply #8 on:** June 09, 2007, 06:27:52 AM »

I really enjoyed this, that Sanchez p2b near the end was really good. One thing though, don't put in stunts where you slid off the roof/bailed and cut them, because its pretty obvious . Keep up the great work!

Vicarious · « **Reply #9 on:** June 09, 2007, 06:32:13 AM »

Quote from: VenomX

One thing though, don't put in stunts where you slid off the roof/bailed and cut them

haha yea about that, i guess i just got really eager and impatient to finish the video and couldnt be bothered to do them again xD

VenomX · « **Reply #10 on:** June 09, 2007, 06:51:18 AM »

Yeah, don't worry about it because its only your first, and you're only gonna get better . Good luck with stunting.

TwistOfate · « **Reply #11 on:** June 09, 2007, 07:03:32 AM »

Nice video you have some potential GJ

jessrocked · « **Reply #12 on:** June 09, 2007, 07:37:05 AM »

Why do most of you always title yer vids something negative and/or offensive?

anyways,yeah its good...
you just gave me a new stunt to beat... thanks

Vicarious · « **Reply #13 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:13:41 PM »

Quote from: jessrocked

Why do most of you always title yer vids something negative and/or offensive?

anyways,yeah its good...
you just gave me a new stunt to beat... thanks

I'm never good at naming things so i went to thesaurus.com, typed in vice city or something and it came up with corruption

Daffy · « **Reply #14 on:** June 09, 2007, 04:34:11 PM »

Good first movie, the song has been used 2 times before but it's a killer song so i didn't mind.
Pretty much none existing editing and average stunts with a old school touch to it which made it an enjoyable watch.
You should enlarge your diversity of stunts by doing more grinds and different kinds of stunts.
You got some good air with all vehicles on 2 wheels which is a good thing so you're not tied to the PCJ like most of us, that's a plus.
I see some potential in you, i'm kinda tempted to give you some spots that's new to give you a little jump start as i think you can do well.
Next time try to not have those huge black bars on each side of the video so it covers the whole screen.

All in all, very enjoyable, not just because of the content but of the potential i see in it.