For those of us whom haven't seen the movie your speaking of I'll try and put my best into this.
I found it very confusing, and maybe even a little frustrating to watch...cause I really had no idea what was going on with the film, even for a short it seemed off.
Editing is worth while however with good use of camhack angles to show different emotions, the camera speaks just as loud as the film should.
Overall its interesting and something I haven't seen, grand job.