Mikey: The pretext intro was pretty well put together with some nice smooth angles & movements, however it begged for a bit more contrast and some odd pale/washed out, sin city style colors. Same can be applied to the post-text cinematics, could've had some mild/lucid color effects on the broken chords, it would've greatly accompanied the liquid feel of the vid, loved what you did with those effects, overall, a pretty sweet entry, although the texts felt a bit empty with no background or anything to compliment them.
MxZ: Loved what you did with the colors! They fit the set mood very well & the cinematic movements were near perfect, except for 0:11-0:14, that part felt a bit too fast in comparison & should've been a bit more mild. Other than that, great cinematics & text work, lovely atmosphere!
Vote goes to MxZ, for having a slightly better composition which just seemed to flow very nicely with the atmosphere.
