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Offline iFlux

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Practice (solo)
« on: January 30, 2013, 01:14:29 PM »
Hello friends this is my new video
i'm still a newbie but I hope to improve
Training in editing

Practice (solo)

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2013, 01:16:12 PM »
CC is too dark, also its very laggy

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2013, 01:18:11 PM »
CC is too dark, also its very laggy

yes I noticed after rendering :(

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2013, 01:33:08 PM »
2nd stunt is Awesome, cool solo  :happy: nice edit btw. 8.5/10.  :wub:

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2013, 03:24:14 PM »
Since you want to be better at editing I'll give some notes. Ofcourse it's laggy but that's not important. The most important thing for me personally is the camera angles. You nailed cinematics sir, good job. The camera's used on the stunts themselfs were pretty bad. Nearly everything was filmed from a 20 degree angle (upwards) and very static. Change camera's more and move them around a bit. Eventhough it was static the camera angle at 1:10 in combination with the cinematic infront of it was pretty good imo.  :) Also play with the zoom of the replay fuction. All together it makes your videos more dynamic then they already are. Not a bad video btw.

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 03:52:20 PM »
I liked editing on first part it suited the song pretty well. But you should change cc and camera works for the second song. It's difficult to say what makes editing fit song but I'm sure you will eventually find out as you seem to have to decent taste and ideas. ;) You need to synchronize transitions and effects with sounds better. And shake less.
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I think I did decent work using second song, check it out maybe it will help you out finding that factor that makes editing suitable to soundtrack. :hmm:
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« Last Edit: January 30, 2013, 03:59:39 PM by Kukiel »

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 11:33:12 PM »
I liked editing on first part it suited the song pretty well. But you should change cc and camera works for the second song. It's difficult to say what makes editing fit song but I'm sure you will eventually find out as you seem to have to decent taste and ideas. ;) You need to synchronize transitions and effects with sounds better. And shake less.
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I think I did decent work using second song, check it out maybe it will help you out finding that factor that makes editing suitable to soundtrack. :hmm:
Golden Times
Nice collab btw  :euro:

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 11:44:28 PM »
Nice
i like stunts

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #8 on: February 01, 2013, 06:17:26 AM »
nice vid bro

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Re: Practice (solo)
« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2013, 05:10:52 PM »
I like stunts also :euro:
:lol: I got that joke

That is a great solo you got there, considering you are a 'noobie' (Your own words). I like most of these stunts indeed. And like they said the camera angles need work, but you'll get to that point. For now I'd say good job and keep improving :a-cheer:

 

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