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Offline Mr.Magic

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« Reply #15 on: July 16, 2005, 04:12:00 PM »
The Billboards were pretty basic. The grinds were ok i guess  :) It was very good for a first movie though, lot better than Pure Insanity.

Editing: 7/10
Stunts: 7.6/10
Music: 10/10 Good tempo.

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« Reply #16 on: July 17, 2005, 04:19:25 AM »
Anything with the editing that was bad? Got any tips for me?

I think I´ve learned more about stunting after reading your comments, but not about editing. Or I´ve learned to make the vid shorter and get rid of some stunts, but I want to know a bit more about transitions and effects.

Many questions, I know. Now it´s just up to you to answer them...  :)

Thanks again!

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« Reply #17 on: July 17, 2005, 05:23:47 AM »
I am downloading it now :)

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« Reply #18 on: July 17, 2005, 05:47:16 AM »
I really enjoyed this vid...really good for a first..some really cool stunts like that boat PB that rocked man, and some other greats and nift stuff along the way...it was long so had filler but there was easily enough for a shorter great vid with just nice, new stunts...editing was great aswell, the font effects at the start and the synching were really great..music choice was also nice and I loved your mixing into Like The angel..it was AWESOME.. Anyhow man some old stunts and easy ones but just get your best stunts next time and your vid will be great.. 8.5/10

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« Reply #19 on: July 18, 2005, 06:25:30 AM »
I agree with everything that has been said :) Good job! 8/10

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« Reply #20 on: July 22, 2005, 05:26:47 PM »
[span style=\'font-size:15pt;line-height:100%\']Marklunds review of "B(l)ack In Business"[/span]

Filesize: 102 399 kb (102 megabytes)
Length: 07:58 (7 minutes & 58 seconds)
Codec: WMV
Intro music: The Hives - Back In Black
Main music: Turbonegro - The Age Of Pamparius
Main & Outro music: Rise Against - Like The Angel
Stunter: Tackleberry
Editing: Tackleberry

Took me about 9 minutes to download this one.

Good things, that I liked:
  • Great music with a good tempo.
  • Some jawdropping stunts.
  • Some really nice rotations.
  • Good quality.
Bad things, that could be better:
  • Instead of using a white image to make the flash effects, use the brightness effect on a clip instead, it gives much better results.
  • Next time, don't have those "Before stunt, drive around in the city" clips, they are very slow and is making the movie kinda boring.
  • Not so good synching, there were flashes that got along with the music, but not much with the stunting and changing of clips.
  • The intro were too long when you drove around in the city, could've been more action or something cool while he was driving around.
  • Many grinds were pretty slow and boring, so next time, speed them up and it will look much better.
  • Kinda too long vid, could be better to make 2 movies instead of one. You would have enough replays for that.
Very good first stuntvideo! I liked some of the stunts really much, such as the first stunt (jump2grind) and some high p2b's. The editing is good, but needs some improvements. The music is very good too, with nice tempo and it's rock. I hope you'll make another movie and find a crew. Really enjoyable movie, download it now!

7.2/10

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« Reply #21 on: July 23, 2005, 01:36:41 AM »
Thank you Marklund! I really appreciate that kind of reviews and I´ll try to learn from your excellent tips.

Thanks!

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« Reply #22 on: July 23, 2005, 02:48:16 AM »
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Thank you Marklund! I really appreciate that kind of reviews and I´ll try to learn from your excellent tips.

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If you got any questions, just hit me up on msn. ;)

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« Reply #23 on: July 23, 2005, 02:55:22 AM »
Downloading... :D

EDIT: Ok i watched it. It was quite a nice video dude. Though you used quite a few of the stunts from Buzzsaws gasoline...whether it is a coincidence or not i dont know. Grinds were as said by marklund, kinda slow and boring... One thing i commend you on are a few of the combos in your vid  :D Nice work!

Stunts: 6.5
A few good ones in there but the rest were kinda ordinary  :(

Editing 8
Your editing was solid apart from a few syncing problems

Music 9
Fast paced and exciting...went well i think

Overall
7.5/10

Nice job m8! Watch a whole lot of stunt vids and get inspired for your next vid  :D  
« Last Edit: July 23, 2005, 03:56:28 AM by Grove4Life »

 

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