Artifex

[Shifftee]

That was quite a good attempt on being Petar.

[VaNilla]

Nice job, but I didn't really connect with the pacing. In my opinion a faster pace with offbeat transitions through the stunts would have worked much better at keeping it engaging, I feel like you stayed with each stunt for too long so things got too predictable. I also think the camera angles didn't tell a 'story', they didn't transition together very well IMO. It's not that the angles were bad because they were actually good, but something I'd work on is going back after finishing the edit and recording the angles so they transition together nicely once you know the order of the stunts. What I mean by this is that you shouldn't use similar camera moves one after the other, they should blend and reverse from clip to clip. On the positive side you had some pretty creative ideas with the effects, I liked that you matched the rainy weather with the mood of the song and the overall editing was good

[FELIX]

^ Thanks, and normally I focus more on camera angles but this time my main goal was to find some fitting effects because I was really really bored.

[Determined]

Yes I told you what I really don't like about your vids. But I didn't tell lies because obviously those effects are not unsynched (I asked Baseline about a bigger review in msn and he said I need better cam angles and flow but the cc and effects were "very good").

You could atleast let me know which effects were fail by giving the exact time in the video but okay whatever.

I doubt this was the first vid where you gave your senf dazu but if it is like that then I did you wrong.

you said my vids lag,for me and others they are smooth as hell,lol? that is the first thing
i can ask some other editors and i bet some of them also can see that some effeckts are unsynch...
detail so that you stop crying:
the blind in/out effects at 0:18 dont fit really imo
after that the tv simulator ended to quickly,what it maked unsynch
the first cam movements in vegas at the cabbie boost at 0:33 are unsynch and doesnt fit aswell
0:47 this effeckts when it turns a bit into black is unsych
the last radial blur effeckt is unsynch and doesnt fit,also i cant even hear a beat,drum etc. that makes it placed there
ich habe fertig,you're lucky now?

I love how it's still not constructive criticism  Where are the tips? Where's your point of view, suggestions on how to improve the vid?  Just grow the fuck up dude, you can show yourself as a way more considerate & respectable person if you don't hold a grudge against a few bad words CW has thrown your way & tried to look at it from his point of view, instead, you choose to continuously embarrass yourself. Why?  Just let go & chill the fuck out 

Loved the vid cloudy, kinda made me think of what's going on inside a mind of a schizophreniac 

[lilj]

awesome stunts arti, one of my favorites from you, CW that was epic, keep doing these videos, you are amazing

[FELIX]

Thanks guys. 

[NuclearDeath]

Me likey 

[Amaluna]

cool stunts lol but idk anything about editting just yet

[Syny]

Great editing cloudwalker   

[electric]

Ouch, at least you fitted the effects so perfectly though, good job

[Tg]

dude This is some Sweet editing  and the stunt are Nice no joke realy  

[mqtH]

the editing was decent. Nice stunts

[Reynard The Fox]

Artifex needs to suck orre dick

[Basiµm]

ARTHUR