The first part was kinda bland and uninteresting, didn't really see a reason for it.
The 2nd part could've used a more complex, more fitting cc to the song, 00:56 would've been better synced to the beat rather than the vocal, it makes it seem kinda off, considering that the beat comes right after the vocal. the blur on the last angle wasn't too fitting as well, you could've at least added a pan crop zoom in to sync to make it more energetic. Also, don't use an angle that has a lot of camfucks in it, it really ruins the vid.
Other than that, it's not bad for a beginner, keep with this style for now & advance to more complex, fx variable edits when you feel you're ready