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Offline Amphetamine

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« Reply #15 on: October 23, 2007, 12:41:45 PM »
not bad  good job overall

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« Reply #16 on: October 24, 2007, 02:46:43 AM »
nice  love the music  but some old stunts :&



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« Reply #17 on: October 24, 2007, 08:32:17 AM »
music - horrible

editing - horrible

stunts - old/easy

3.6/10

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« Reply #18 on: October 24, 2007, 09:00:06 AM »
Ok -

Stunts in order.

1. - A bit sloppy but nice grind. Seen that rail done zillions of times though...
2.  - Nice pizzaboy grab.
3. - I Didnt like this stunt , looked like the run up to number 1
4. -  Ok Grind but you could have ended further along the rail.
5. - ???
6. -  Too simple for my liking.
7. - Ok , but i didnt see what you bumped off...
8. -  Nope , ledge fail. Aim to keep on them for longer.
9. - I Thought you would have landed on the roof with this one... ended with a grab instead... Ok.
10. - Bsm , first i've seen in a while. Nice landing. Could have been more precise and landed on the wall..
11. - Not a good bump , well the bump itself was ok but it was just the wrong place. Aim bigger.
12. - Could have got the infernus over the wall that you hit...
13. - Nice grind.
14. - Damn collision files ... should have kept it where the roof actually was. Best stunt in your vid ?
15. - Double grab was ok.
16. - Seen that wall ride been done better. Definatly old.
17. - Waste of time. Wouldn't even call that a stunt.
18. - ???
19. - That was wat... a stuckie ?

Music - Ok , didnt fit the vid perfectly though. In your next one try and sync it together more.
Editing - Basic fading.

Overall - Too many old stunts. Basic editing and nice music. Try and complete rails when grinding and aim higher. - 5/10.

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« Reply #19 on: October 24, 2007, 11:34:48 AM »
Quote from: Sweet
music - horrible

editing - horrible

stunts - old/easy

3.6/10
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