I think it was a pretty darn good vid for a first try. Just a few tips:
- Use the whole song in the vid. It looks a whole lot better when the whole song is put in the vid instead of cutting it short.
- A few of those stunts looked really dark, I have problems like that when I stunt in LC sometimes. I don't know what program you used to edit the vid but i'm sure there is a "brighten" feature
- I'd love to see more variety in your next vid, a few grinds for example. Try some taxi boosts as well (I love them!).
All in all I see a lot of potential in you, keep up the good work!