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« on: May 06, 2007, 07:17:45 AM »
This is my first vid

Check it here

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8GvjHFVf9k

Any advice, help or tips and stuff would be very usefull

Have fun.

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« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2007, 07:26:17 AM »
It okay for the first stunt movie.
U should practice more the landing. It's good that u can bump but u should use the bumping for something like get in a house. In one scene u just flied over the 24/7 Logo. That's not really a stunt^^.
IMO: A stunt is a A to B (to C to D (Combo)) thing like:
-Bump 2 wallride
-Bump 2 Grind
-Bump on a Roof
-Bump into a Airgrab
-Wallride 2 grind
etc.
something like that
Just a bump is nothing

U should find more spots and try stunt with a packer. Be creative
greetz
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« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2007, 07:34:19 AM »
Quote from: Guardian
It okay for the first stunt movie.
U should practice more the landing. It's good that u can bump but u should use the bumping for something like get in a house. In one scene u just flied over the 24/7 Logo. That's not really a stunt^^.
IMO: A stunt is a A to B (to C to D (Combo)) thing like:
-Bump 2 wallride
-Bump 2 Grind
-Bump on a Roof
-Bump into a Airgrab
-Wallride 2 grind
etc.
something like that
Just a bump is nothing

U should find more spots and try stunt with a packer. Be creative
greetz

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« Reply #3 on: May 06, 2007, 07:34:26 AM »
Not bad for a first, but you just flew over houses,signs and more.

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« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2007, 07:36:59 AM »
Ok thanks guys,

But the packer thing, all the car spawners won't work so thats why I didn't got to that yet

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« Reply #5 on: May 06, 2007, 10:05:02 AM »
your skin remember me deathcobra

try to land high roof or just roof

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« Reply #6 on: May 06, 2007, 12:18:41 PM »
It's good to see you can bump but it seemed kind of pointless . Landing onto a roof/building or whatever makes it alot better  . You should try some other things rather than just bumps  .

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« Reply #7 on: May 06, 2007, 12:35:31 PM »
if this is first video ist good job ))

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« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2007, 01:10:54 PM »
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your skin remember me deathcobra

try to land high roof or just roof

I noticed a few days later @ a movie of him he had the same lol

And it was also a little bit too prove/practice that I can bump and stuff and yeah it's my first.

Thanks for the advice everybody

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« Reply #9 on: May 10, 2007, 12:10:29 PM »
Hm for me is this movie so low...
Editing in this movie 0/10
Muzic maybe 5/10
And stunst ? not so pro but some nice 7/10

for me 5.5/10...

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« Reply #10 on: May 11, 2007, 02:57:45 AM »
wow da^, harsh lol,
i liked it lol, it was very basic, but was nice for a first stunt vid, yeah everyone else summed it well, just try some bigger stunts next time.
and deffinetly some more editing, well i gave it 6/10 good job

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« Reply #11 on: May 11, 2007, 03:08:00 AM »
leave the guy alone, he's probably a youtube stunter

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« Reply #12 on: May 11, 2007, 04:58:33 AM »
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leave the guy alone, he's probably a youtube stunter
Yeah ofcourse leave him alone so he can never get better..  
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