First off, congrats on getting your first video out :rocker:
Onto the film
For a first stunt video the stunts werent too bad. One thing I would say is maybe not use so much slow motion. As it can really slow down the pace of the video in a bad way.
Next, for your other video, perhaps try to work on the music syncs. Now I know that song wasnt the best in the world to sync to, so Ill give you some credit there.
Also I noticed on a few stunts you filmed in game, rather than in the replay mode. Always film your stunts in the replay mode, nobody likes to watch stunt vids with the HUD still on the screen.
One more thing, was I noticed a stunt or two where you cut off the landing of the PCJ. Try to avoid putting stunts you didnt land in your videos, unless its something really really good.
All in all I say its a great first effort at a stunt video, and I look forward to seeing more work from you.
For a final rating, Im gonna have to go with a 6/10
:rocker: