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Offline Mini-Me

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« on: August 11, 2005, 11:50:08 PM »
Just put together a little intro for a contest (I think Blackstar announced it here) and wanted to know if I'm going in the right direction. It's pretty short because it's just the beginning of it, but please give some suggestions on how to make it better.

http://files.filefront.com/A/;4033631;;/fileinfo.html

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« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2005, 01:33:52 AM »
Lookin good  :) you took quite a while introducing yourself though. Some cool effects dude  :D  

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« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2005, 04:39:45 AM »
pretty good man
« Last Edit: August 12, 2005, 04:45:20 AM by ftkcarl »

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« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2005, 01:06:21 AM »

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« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2005, 01:52:22 AM »
much better (Y)

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« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2005, 04:41:12 AM »
Yeah nice editing job Mini. A good choice of music aswell mate.

 

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