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Completely not my Style
« on: August 09, 2013, 11:25:27 PM »
just want to know if I can make a Edit that brings u to a "chill" atmosphere.
hope I made it.
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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2013, 12:12:46 AM »
just decrease the shake and work with pan/crop , it would better imo .

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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2013, 04:13:55 AM »
just decrease the shake and work with pan/crop , it would better imo .
I'am interested where u see "shakes" ?
Don't know what u understand under shakes, but for me those "shakes" are norman Cam movements.

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0:48 - 0:55 and 1:04 are Shakes.

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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2013, 09:15:34 AM »
I mean Newblue ME Active Camera .

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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2013, 06:07:35 PM »
Cut down on the art beats, sheesh, and yeah cut down on pan/crop, newblue, which ever you used here & work on your angles, they're way too close & don't have any scenery in them to complement the mood & make the vid look nicer, try more far angles that have nice depth with the background.

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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2013, 01:18:36 PM »
Cut down on the art beats, sheesh, and yeah cut down on pan/crop, newblue, which ever you used here & work on your angles, they're way too close & don't have any scenery in them to complement the mood & make the vid look nicer, try more far angles that have nice depth with the background.

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Re: Completely not my Style
« Reply #6 on: August 12, 2013, 02:34:30 AM »
Cut down on the art beats, sheesh, and yeah cut down on pan/crop, newblue, which ever you used here & work on your angles, they're way too close & don't have any scenery in them to complement the mood & make the vid look nicer, try more far angles that have nice depth with the background.
http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/007/423/untitle.JPG
Meme him all you want but he is right. Art beats were annoyingly overwhelming. Either make the oppacity lower or just use less of them at once. But your biggest learning point is camera angles. Try switching them more while showing a stunt. A recent example would be Technical Damage. That editing was not 'chill' in any way but the camera switching is evident there. For a great editing to come together you need to "feel the song" (like a total hippy). And one, not so great, camera angle on a stunt just doesn't cut it. No matter how many art beats you throw at it  :P

 

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