Great vid, but a few fillers imo (SAiVC polebump 2 grind comes to mind). However you did have some epic dropbumps and some awesome ideas as well. The video looked like some weird crossover between a NB and a DSS video; I saw some really funky stunts (like the grind 2 precision near the Malibu Club in VC) but also some ledgegrinds and dropbumps, which remind me a lot of DSS videos for some reason.
Work on getting rid of those fillers and I can only conclude that you're network crew material. Great video, one you can really be proud of.