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Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious |DARKSTAR WON|
« on: September 14, 2011, 06:17:27 PM »
Darkstar versus Furious
Challenge: Best text effect using folowing font.
font:http://www.dafont.com/variete.font
Rules:you have to make it all by yourself, can't ask to anyone to do it, once you submited it, you can take it back if opponent haven't posted his entry, and make a new one, you have to submit picture and psd document.
Deadline 3 days from this post, you can ask for extension before deadline ends.
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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2011, 01:12:40 AM »


my fast entry  :sleep:

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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2011, 05:38:54 AM »
I didn't see this before now D:
Gotta get to it then.



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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2011, 12:20:37 PM »
aight, you have too submitpsd aswell you know.

Furious, your entry really looks fast, messy and unfinished.the glow loooks weird aswell,and is placed pretty bad.

Darkstar, looks like you just cut out the picture and added some saddows, but it looks allright.

My vote goes to Darkstar
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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #4 on: September 17, 2011, 01:05:10 PM »
aight, you have too submitpsd aswell you know.

Furious, your entry really looks fast, messy and unfinished.the glow loooks weird aswell,and is placed pretty bad.

Darkstar, looks like you just cut out the picture and added some saddows, but it looks allright.

My vote goes to Darkstar

because it was fast, i dont know you posted challenges  :lol: :lol:

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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #5 on: September 17, 2011, 02:08:28 PM »
You should also say what we did right, cause right now all I'm thinking is "Damn I suck, why did I join this."

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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #6 on: September 17, 2011, 02:57:42 PM »
There is no criteries what's right and what's wrong.
on yours good thing was that you used drop shadow, it always makes texts to look better.
For Furious was the reflect shinny thingie, only could've been made a bit better :P

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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2011, 01:22:03 AM »
Furious: It would've been MUCH better if that glow was on the letters only.

Darkstar: Not sure if you used a custom pattern or used a sample image and just cut it out. Either way, good job.

Bottom line, my vote goes to Darkstar.

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Re: Round 1, group one Darkstar vs Furious
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 12:47:43 PM »
Darkstar's one look kinda strage to me. Would fit as a video tag, for example - if it was brighter. It has a drop shadow which gave it some depth, props for that, but in another hand, it seemed to be a pattern from something if you get what I mean. Looks like you downloaded an image and use a mask to make the text fit.

+You got that outter glow to fit the text
+Depth due to that drop shadow
+Font helped your idea to work just fine

-Seemed a patter as mentioned before
-Missed some inner brightness in this
(Could've been done) Use some bleeding options with multi-layer stuff to something more pleasant, I'd say.

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Furious' seemed rushed and not finished to me. The purple tone you chose fitted that font perfectly, althought, that glowish pattern you used there kinda ruinned it. You could've masked it out to make it fit more decently and used some stripped replacement instead of that brighty thing.


+Color used that fitted the font
+Drop shadow

-Bright pattern
-Lack of details

(Could've been done) Used a second tone of purple and use a stripe replacement there to enhance your tag.


Vote goes to Darkstar

 

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