Really choppy framerate & the angles are pretty bad too. The whole thing lacks energy/action, it seems kinda slow & dull, but that's also 'cause of the stunt & the frramerate. Try recording with less fps & changing the playback, and make more cuts & blurs/shakes or something else that "adds energy" to a vid, if you're working with a heavy, energetic song, that is.
Keep improving :>