Lame? 1:21 is everything but lame, it's some of the most epic stuff I've seen! the finisher & first guest stunt were cool as well, so were the rest of the stunts, you've got great potential, keep doing what you're doing!
Editingwise, the colors were too bright & your record quality seems LQish, the pixels are clearly visible on textures, so wok on that, but other than that, the editing is pretty solid, nice angles & atmosphere, Jimmy Eat World fits in just right with the flow
great job dude, can't wait to see more from you!