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Offline Eddie

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Ok, i need critics :P
« on: April 27, 2010, 10:28:41 AM »
sorry Beat.wmv

Help me for once guys, tell me how to improve.

this is an edit test for render settings, cam angles, cc + reflections

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 10:58:11 AM »
nice colors, bad cam angles

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 11:05:19 AM »
gtfo or start reading :|

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 11:11:49 AM »
"i need critics", i gave you critics for cam angle and CC/reflections

but kk, work on your cam angles.  <_<
« Last Edit: April 27, 2010, 11:13:33 AM by Kacknase »

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 11:24:12 AM »
too many things to critic :|

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 11:28:36 AM »
too many things to critic :|

guess you need to start typing  :a-cheer:

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 02:26:53 PM »
too many things to critic :|

guess you need to start typing  :a-cheer:

ofc.

the cc was pretty cool,but the enb didn't really fit imo and it was too saturated.
the cam angles could have looked better without those camfucks,they really brought it down.try to avoid fucking the cam  :lol:.also they were not so good.
the effects were smooth and synched well but also not fitting.you could've used some 'soft' blur instead of that noise.
the video quality/resolution/size/render settings were alright.
the audio quality was bad

oh and btw that velvetmetter effect or w/e was really ugly.

overall it was ok,but you really have to improve the cam angles.gl.

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #7 on: April 27, 2010, 02:42:59 PM »
if you take your time, and do your own thing, everything will be just fine (for your self).

ain't that what matters? pleasing some guys on the internet that haven't hit puberty yet won't make much of a difference in your life. and im saying this because you have nice tits.

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2010, 11:12:57 AM »
if you take your time, and do your own thing, everything will be just fine (for your self).

ain't that what matters? pleasing some guys on the internet that haven't hit puberty yet won't make much of a difference in your life. and im saying this because you have nice tits.

My tits are awesome :a-cheer:, you havn't hit puberty yet Meetie?

too many things to critic :|

guess you need to start typing  :a-cheer:

ofc.

the cc was pretty cool,but the enb didn't really fit imo and it was too saturated.
the cam angles could have looked better without those camfucks,they really brought it down.try to avoid fucking the cam  :lol:.also they were not so good.
the effects were smooth and synched well but also not fitting.you could've used some 'soft' blur instead of that noise.
the video quality/resolution/size/render settings were alright.
the audio quality was bad

oh and btw that velvetmetter effect or w/e was really ugly.

overall it was ok,but you really have to improve the cam angles.gl.


Thank's bro

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 12:16:09 PM »
It was alright. Can't say more.

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2010, 12:18:48 PM »
I saw nothing wrong with this but in the end what matters most is if YOUR happy with it.

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 12:28:07 PM »
Very nice, there were some cam angle problems in your previous vids but you've improved.


Also, TWO TAKE IT

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #12 on: April 28, 2010, 12:33:49 PM »
Not bat at all but this CC is overused and boring already. Next time try to zoom in/out cameras in good moments and do not make camfucks :P

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Re: Ok, i need critics :P
« Reply #13 on: April 29, 2010, 12:36:02 AM »
Thanks guys!

 

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