-Disliked the numbers (1 2 3 4), they look so ugly, round and fat; don't fit into the concept of the vid at all.
-0:12 Flashing Border I don't know if you intended it to look it like that but flashing borders look shit IMO
-0:17 Failed Mask Transition Looks simply like bullshit.
-0:17-0:23 Stunt looks unimpressive from this angle, sync was ok.
-0:23-0:24 Good sync to the music, looked good.
-0:25-0:31 The cam angle was too close to the vehicle. The stunt looks boring from this close range cam angle.
-0:32-0:42 Same shit like the point above. The range was to close to the vehicle.
-0:52 Should be one of the highlights in a stuntvideo. It should look BRUTAL, but it isn't. It looks boring.
Other points:
-This long repetitive fade to black transition sucked ass (first use at 0:32)
-Good color correction.
-The sync was sometimes good
-Almost no atmosphere was build up
Well, atleast you tried to create something below average.
